[Nielsen L] Writing Practice Test 1296017

the diagram shows a procedure for apply to the university for high school graduates.

firstly, student need to get their high school degree first. and then they must complete the application form from the website, after that the form need to sent to the admin. once the form sended the student must wait for 2 weeks to the next step. after 2 weeks if the student got accepted they need to select their subjects and also register with dean, and finally thay can enter the university.

on the other hand, there is another case if the application form that have sended to the admin got rejection, the application will canceled and the registrant would not be able to entry the university. but there is another chance the registrant can complete the alternative course and sent it to the admin once again to try the second chance.

to sum up, there is 7 step of the procedure to entry to the university, however it might change if the registeration has something wrong.

whilst some people think children experiences when they have not start the school are the most influental to their future life, and some other think the most influental experinces are when their at school and as a young adult. this essay will agree with the second view when they become young adult and they are a student, however this essay will provide the reason for both views.

on the first hand, people say that the most influential times for childrens are when the child have not starting school this is because when they still a kid they can learn something with fast and ease so they can easily affect by positive and negative things, moreover at that age they can not even judge which one is the right thing to do or which one is the bad thing to not do. research shows that when we was a kid our thought and behaviour are the result from our parents.

however, on the other hand some people think the most influential times are when they become young adult, that because when they go to school they meet many other people and learn alot of think. that makes they can easily affected by others behaviour and lead to their permanent personality until they become adult. study said teenager are the times when human curiousity are the highest along their life so that at that times a person can learn alot of different things.

in conclusions, both statement have different reasons. but i think from both views the second view are the most makes sense and i personally get through it.