[Ha L] Writing Practice Test 1089859

the line chart illustrates the number of passengers on the Underground Station in London City.

Overall, at 8 o'clock a.m and 18 o'clock p.m, the number of passengers in London is dramatically higher than at other times of the day and the lowest number of users is at 6 o'clock a.m and 16 o'clock p.m.

The highest value of utilization is at 8 a.m with 450 passengers and its peak is at the highest value in a day. After that, from 8 a.m to 10 p.m, the number of customers dramatically falls down and the number of people is nearly 200. From 10 a.m to 15 p.m, this value fluctuated from 200 to 300 customers in London Underground station and significantly went down and reach the lowest point at just only 100 customers at 16 p.m. After 2 hours, at 18 p.m, the number of passengers in the second ranks in a day with nearly 400 customers in the station. However, after 18 p.m, this value dramatically decreases and closes with under 150 passenger at 22 p.m.

In the economic environment, strong developed countries often give poor countries money as a method to help them to sell the poverty. However, this is believed that this way does not bring good results and they should find the other method instead. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea.

Money is one of the important parts of the development of a country. It can create opportunities for the government to improve their healthcare service, public categories, education programs and so on. For instance, in real life, the program supports poor children who cannot go to school because of a lack of money is make many new opportunities for them to create their new lives and this is one method to create high-skill labour for the development of the country. Improving the skill of labour is an important thing to develop the economy. In that case, the investment from the support from different richer countries is a suitable method for the poorer countries.

However, sometimes poor country has a fluctuating economy and this means that the money they borrow from other countries may become bad loans. This will be a weakness point for their economy because they must need bigger investments from other countries to solve their problem but at the same way, if the money does not be used in a suitable way, it cannot be used for their own goals is support for the development of the poor country and solve their problem. As a result, the less developed countries cannot lend their own loans.

In conclusion, I think money is a good methodology to help the weaker countries but on the other hand, the bigger economy can support in other ways like creating international courses for students of this country to create a higher labour source. Moreover, the support from the worldwide office in the different parts as the sustainable development goals mentioned include health, labour and so on is really important and is the difference ways instead of the financial aid to solve the poverty of these countries.