[Yesunbileg B] Writing Practice Test 1051555

The data given shows the variations of individuals who went for international travel in 4 timelines with half a decade gap.

The traveled areas are Africa, America, Asia and the pacific, Europe, and Middle East. The table starts with a year 1990, which had the lowest number of people among others with total of 448.9 million travelers. On the other hand, total of 693.7 million which is the most quantity of people traveled was in 2005. Number of people traveling was raising in every destination except America between 2000 and 2005 that lowered from 118.2 to 113.2.

The data number increased dramatically from 1990 to 1995 and the total number lifted up by approximately 200 million. Europe had the most travelers which was 280.2 million in 1990, and 400.2 in 2005. Europe always had travelers more than the half of total travelers. In contrary, Middle East had the lowest number of travelers which was 9.8 in 1990 and increased to 16.8 in 2005.

While most individuals go to university for academic study, more people should be motivated to do vocational training because there is a shortage of professional workers like electricians and plumbers. Nowadays, people seeks for high paying jobs which is mostly academical. As a consequence, work force for works vitally necessary for society like electricians and plumbers are needed.

Academic jobs that require intelligence and constant working are trending jobs these days. For instance, software engineer, lawyer, surgeon. However, as a result of high number of people going for these jobs, unemployed rate is getting higher. Because of the high wages, plenty of individuals are choosing majors that they do not like and interested in. This results, low quality work and unemployment.

I believe, there are people who are interested in jobs you can get trained in vocational training. People view this job only from one viewpoint and thinks it is only thing plumbers and electricians do. People should understand that there more aspects in this jobs. There are many ways to develop business on electrician and plumbing business. For instance, the business can work with construction companies on buildings. In my country, we lack professional electricians and plumbers. New company for these jobs could be profitable in this area. However, workforce is lacked.

To show citizens how these jobs have room for improvement, government should take action by giving more understanding. That way, unemployment rate will lower and lack of work force can be solved.

In conclusion, vocational training is essential for society. Individuals should choose to do what they like, but they are going for high paying jobs. It can be the cause of social problems like high employment rate. People have wrong understanding about these jobs that have many room for development. Furthermore, I agree with the statement given.