[Sadia Mahrin Moonlee U] Writing Practice Test 1026204

THE PROVIDED GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF UNDERGROUND STATION TRAVELLERS IN LONDON.

OVERALL, IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT THE STATION SEEMS BUSIER AT 8.00AM IN THE MORNING AND EVENING 18.00PM THAN ANY OTHER TIME OF THE DAY.

TO BEGIN WITH, THE LOWEST AMOUNT OF PASSENGERS TRAVEL THROUGH THE UNDERGROUND STATION IN LONDON IS AT 6.00 AM IN THE MORNING. THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF PASSENGERS CAN BE SEEN AT 8.00 O'CLOCK IN MORNING WHICH IS APPROXIMATELY 400.

FROM 9.00 AM TO 16.00 AM THE NUMBER SAW A FLUCTUATION BEFORE THEY PEAKED AT ALMOST 390 AT 18.00 PM IN THE EVENING. SINCE IT'S THE TIME FOR THE STUDENTS AND WORKERS TRAVELLING BACK HOME AFTER FINISHING WORK THAT'S WHY IT SEEMS RUSH AT THIS TIME OF THE DAY. HOWEVER, AT THE END OF THE DAY BETWEEN 19.00 TO 22.00 IT AGAIN SHOWS LESS AMOUNT OF PEOPLE TRAVELLING IN THE LONDON UNDERGROUND TRAIN STATION.

DEVELOPING COUNTRIES ARE FREQUNTLY SEEN TO TAKE MONETARY HELP FROM THE DEVELOPED COUNTRIES. HOWEVER, IT NEVER HELPS TO REDUCE POVERTY FULLY. IT IS ARGUED THAT THESE LESS AFFLUENT NATIONS SHOUD PROVIDED WITH OTHER THINGS AS AID FROM THESE RICH COUNTRIES SO THAT IT CAN HELP FOR A LONG RUN. BECAUSE MONEY CAN HELP THE POORS MOMENTARILY BUT AFTER THAT THEY AGAIN LIVE POORLY. I TEND TO AGREE WITH THIS PART THAT THE DEVELOPED COUNTRIES SHOULD PROVIDE DIFFERENT TYPES OF AID TO THE POOR COUNTRY RATHER THAN MONEY.

FIRSTLY, WHEN DEVELOPED COUNTRIES GAVE MONEY TO THE DEVELOPING COUNTRIES IT CAN SURELY HELP THE CITIZENS OF THE COUNTRIES. BUT AFTER USING THESE MONEY FOR THEIR GENERAL NEED SUCH AS FOOD,MEDICINE ETC THEY AGAIN STARTED TO LIVE POORLY. AS THIS IS A SHORT TERM HELP SO IT CAN NOT HELP TO REDUCE POVERTY FROM THE COUNTRY. FOR INSTANCE, 2005 UNITED STATES DONATED 20 BILLION DOLLER TO THE UNDEVELOPED COUNTRIES BUT STILL IT CAN NOT HELP TO REDUCE THE POVERTY FROM THOSE COUNTRIES.

MOREOVER, THESE DEVELPOED COUNTRIES SHOULD INVEST IN HEALTH CARE SERVICE, HOSPITALS, SCHOOLS AND UNIVERSITIES OF THE DEVELOPING COUNTRIES. BEACUSE IT CAN BE A HUGE HELP FOR A POOR COUNTRY WHICH CAN HELP THE CITIZEN FOR A LONG TIME. THEIR INVEST CAN HELP THE CITIZENS OF POOR NATIONS TO RECEIVE MEDICAL TREATMENT, QUALITY EDUCATION, HOSPITALITY AND ALL. IT CAN ALSO HELP THE COUNTRY TO BE STABLE POLITICALLY AND ECONOMICALLY AS WELL.

HOWEVER, BEFORE PROVIDING THE DEVELOPING COUNTRY ANY HELP THE DEVELOPED COUNTRY SHOULD PEOVIDE THEM FINANCIAL ASSISTANCE BEACUSE MONEY CAN HELP THE MOST.

TO SUM UP, DEFINATELY MONEY CAN SOLVE THE HUNGER BUT I PERSONALLY THINK THAT THE RICH COUNTRIES SHOULD PROVIDE THE POOR COUNTRIES DIFFERENT TYPES OF HELP RATHER THAN MONEY WHICH CAN GO FOR A LONG RUN.