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FINAL SCORE FROM IELTS-GPT Evaluation

Overall
6.0
Task 1
6.0
Task 2
6.5

Overall Score 6.0

General Feedback
Your essays show a good understanding of the topics. However, attention to grammatical accuracy, vocabulary usage, and the flow of ideas could be improved to enhance overall coherence and clarity of your arguments.

TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

You should write at least 150 words.

You should write at least 150 words.

The rendered table displays the cost of per kiloliter per kiloliter of water and average household expenditure on water in five Australian cities, namely AdelaidenAdelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth, and Sydney.

Overall, it is lucid from the data that most of the given cities have variable costs for the water which increases after 125 kiloliters usage of water is exceeded 125 kiloliters. The average water bill is above 300 dollars in all the cities except Melbourne where househols spendshouseholds spend around 250 dallorsdollars for water.

Starting with cities with the cheapest water rates, it costs .42 dollars per Kiloliter for the water in Adelaide and Perth if usage is less than 125 kiloliters, but if usage is over 125 kiloliters, the cost in Adelaide increases to 1 dollar, although it remains the same in Perth. EventhoughEven though, the cost of water in Melbourne is .78 dollars, Melbourne households have the lowest water expenditure.

Coming to Brisbane, where the increment in the price of water with subject to relates to usage is marginal, around .03 dollars. Sydney has the most expensive water, priced at around .98 dollars per kiloliter; therefore, Sydney households have the highest water expense, around 319 dollars.
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Task 1 Overall score: 6.0
6.0
You have managed to capture the key data points regarding water costs and household expenditures in different cities. The comparative analysis of costs based on usage is effective.
6.0
The overall structure of the essay is clear, though some transitions could be smoother. Logical sequence is mostly followed.
5.5
Vocabulary related to the topic is generally appropriate but be mindful of repetitive word forms and typo errors.
5.5
You display an adequate range of grammatical structures, yet there are noticeable errors which hinder meaning. More attention to subject-verb agreement and spelling is recommended.
Sample Answer Overall Score: 7.0
The table illustrates the cost per kiloliter of water and the average household water expense in five major Australian cities: Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth, and Sydney.\n\nOverall, the cities show a trend where water costs increase as consumption exceeds 125 kiloliters, with every city except Melbourne having average expenses over $300. Melbourne, in contrast, maintains a lower average at approximately $250.\n\nIn terms of cost-effectiveness, both Adelaide and Perth offer water at $0.42 per kiloliter for consumption below 125 kiloliters. However, Adelaide sees a significant price jump to $1 per kiloliter when consumption increases, unlike Perth, which maintains the same rate. Although Melbourne's average price per kiloliter is higher at $0.78, its aggregate household water expense remains the lowest among the compared cities.\n\nBrisbane witnesses a slight increase in water cost by $0.03 when usage increases, while Sydney features the highest rates at $0.98 per kiloliter, correlating to the highest average water expenditure of approximately $319.
Summary of the Key Improvements
1. Task Achievement
  • Provided clearer and more detailed comparative analysis.
  • Included precise data and context for better clarity.
2. Coherence and Cohesion
  • Enhanced the logical flow between statements.
  • Used a more structured approach to improve reader’s understanding.
3. Lexical Resource
  • Utilized a broader range of vocabulary.
  • Avoided repetitive words and corrected typographical errors.
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
  • Minimized grammatical errors.
  • Used complex structures more accurately for better precision.

TASK 2

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

You should write at least 250 words.

You should write at least 150 words.

Some people are of opinionthe opinion that schools are primarily reponsibleresponsible for teaching students academic subjects and helping them to achieve good scores and vocational skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork would better be taught at home. I do not agree with this statement and believe that it is better if such skills are taught by professionals in school as there is a risk of injury in learning such skill, in learning such skills moreover parents usually do not have enough experience in the field to teach such skills.

To begin with, learning cooking involves used the use of fire, woodwork required requires the use of sharp tools, and dressmaking involves pointy needles, all of above-mentioned the above-mentioned things can cause possible injuries to kids. We need to be extra cautious with children while teaching these skills because children are unware unaware of the hazards related to these skills and might unknowingly harm themselves in the process. Nevertheless, professional lessons can help reduce the possibility of accidents by teaching proper safety instructions.

Furthermore, Parents and friends do not the have the required knowledge to teach such skills. Even though they know the basics of them, it requires a deeper knowledge to teach someone else. Therefore, someone who performs such tasks on a daily basis can be a better teacher of his field. Additionally, there are many new equipments and tools of which a layman might be unware unaware of and therefore cannot teach the use of such modern technology.

To conclude I would like to mention that schools can teach vocational skills in a professional method which will ensure student safety.
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Spelled correctly to match the context
Task 2 Overall score: 6.5
7.0
The essay effectively addresses the prompt by delivering a clear argument against the opinion stated. The thesis is well-supported using relevant examples.
6.5
The essay maintains logical progression of ideas with well-constructed paragraphing. The link between ideas could be enhanced by more varied connectives.
6.5
You have used an adequate range of vocabulary pertinent to the topic, though minor errors and repetitions slightly impact readability.
6.0
There is a fairly good use of complex sentences and a range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors that could be polished to avoid ambiguity.
Sample Answer Overall Score: 7.5
It is often argued that schools should prioritize academic subjects and exam success, leaving vocational skills like cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork to be learned at home. I strongly disagree with this view, contending that schools are equipped to provide professional instruction in these areas, which enhances both safety and learning quality.\n\nFirstly, vocational training involves certain risks, such as the use of potentially dangerous tools and materials. In a structured school environment, professionals trained in safety protocols can mitigate these risks, providing a secure learning setting. At home, the lack of formal training can expose learners, particularly children, to unnecessary dangers.\n\nMoreover, most parents and friends lack the specialized knowledge required for proficient teaching in these crafts. Schools employ qualified instructors who are not only adept in their crafts but are also trained to teach effectively, ensuring that students gain a comprehensive understanding of the subject.\n\nLastly, with the advancement of technology, many vocational fields have seen significant innovations. Schools have the resources to keep up with these changes and incorporate modern equipment and techniques into their teaching, unlike the average home environment.\n\nIn conclusion, by offering vocational education, schools do not just equip students with valuable skills but do so in a manner that prioritizes their safety and provides them with the most current knowledge in the field.
Summary of the Key Improvements
1. Task Achievement
  • Strengthened argumentation and clarified stance
  • Expanded on implications and benefits of school-based vocational training
2. Coherence and Cohesion
  • Enhanced transitions and logical flow of ideas
  • Improved paragraph structuring for clearer argument development
3. Lexical Resource
  • Increased variety in vocabulary usage
  • Corrected and minimized lexical errors
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
  • Broadened range of grammatical structures used
  • Minimized grammatical errors and improved sentence complexity
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