IELTS Recent Mock Tests Volume 5 Writing Practice Test 2

100,000 UK residents were interviewed to see whether they travelled abroad and the reason for it from 1994 to 1998. The results are illustrated in the table. The bar chart compares their destinations in this period.

Overall, the total number of residents travelled abroad experienced an upward trend. Most of them visited Western Europe while North America and other areas were much less popular.

In 1994, 15246 people travelled abroad for holiday. Despite a slight drop in the following year, the number continued to climb steadily to 20700 in 1998. Meanwhile, people travelled for business purpose and those who visited friends or relatives experienced a gradual rising trend throughout this period. The number of the former was 3155 and that of the ladder was 2689. In 1998, their number went up to 3957 and 3181 respectively. People travelled for other reason, however; remained constant over this period.

In 1994, around 20000 UK residents visited Western Europe, the figure fluctuated with an upward trend in the following three years, reaching nearly 25000 people in 1998. By contrast, the number of people visited North America and other regions remained steady in spite of insignificant increase was seen.

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In the contemporary era, there is a heated arguments about past learning. Few people believe that there is no value of learn in past to present time. I completely discord with this statement.  In my discussion ahead, i will examine demerits associated with this trend before it reaches to an appropriate conclusion.

Firstly, there are several inducements associated with this trend, but the prominent reason is in corporate world. In the office, lots of competitions incur in today's era. On that time, experience is play vital role for selection. Furthermore, employees get promotion on the basis of experience. In addition to that, experience person teach few important points to fresher which is require to augment revenue of company. For example, for the survey conducted by USA in job fair, majority of experience choose as higher position on the basis of their learned skill. Hence, this is require to get knowlegde as well as increase skill.

Secondly, another justification is in scientist field. Whereas scientist do lots of efforts only get perfect soluation. Moreover, they spend their most of life for their aim. Due to this, those person will be famous who use their experience to get fruitful result. Furthermore, In india, elder persons who have lots of experience of every things, they teach their younger to respect everyone. Therefore, this is important to use learning and teaching skill in past.

To recapitulate, learning in past is important in today's era. This skill use to get promotion in office as well as to become famous person in world. However, I believe that, the demerits listed in  aforementioned paragraphs, it directly reflects that, it is not only unbeneficial to society but local authorities also.

The first chart represent information of outcome for 100,000 section which travelled abroad during the period of 1994 to 1998.  In addition to, second chart depicts destinations of Western Europe, North America and Other areas during the above mentioned period. Oveall, most of people choose holidays time for visit another counties.

It is crystal clear that during holidays, 15,246 humans go outside on 1994 which is diminished by 348 on 1995. After that number of visitors is increasing during remaining years like 17,896 on 1996, 19,703 on 1997 year and 20,700 on 1998 year. Same as in case of business, starting point of time, 3,155 humans on 1994 are grudually increased and reach 3,957 on 1998. According to visits to friends and relatices,  there are also constantly augmented count of visitors, like 2,689 counted on 1994 and 3,181 on 1998 year. In the fourth option of other reasons, highest amount of visitors 1,054 are on 1997 and lowest number 982 counted are on 1994.

Summarizing all information given, majority of people choose westen europe and less amount of people go for america.

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The following charts show the number of UK residents travelling to the Western Europe,North America and other regions over the course of 1994 to 1998.

The first chart shows the UK residents are travelling to different regions for specific purposes over the 5 years period.Holiday has seen an overall rise since the year 1994 to 1998,although in 1995 the amount of people visiting abroad decreased slightly to about 14898 compared with it's previous year which accounted 15246 people.People visiting abroad showed signs of increased number of residents interested in business purposes starting from the year 1994 to 1998.By 1995 people visting their friends and relatives decreased slightly to around 2628 from 2689 in the year 1994.People visiting for other reasons experienced a fluctuation between 1994 and 1998 and the total number of people's visit to abroad stood around 22072 in 1994,21610 in 1995,24949 people in 1996,27447 in 1997 and 28828 by the year 1998 respectively.

The second chart shows UK residents are more influenced to visit Western Europe more than any other regions during the period of 5 years.About 18000 people in 1994 and in 1995 the growth of visitors saw a little decrease at approximately 16000 travelling to Western Europe.Starting from 1995 to 1998 there was a gradual rise of residents travelling to Western Europe,North America and other areas.

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The table displays the amount of UK citizens travelling abroad from a period of 1994 to 1998 and their reasons for that, while bar chart illustrated the main destination of travelling abroad, which included “Western Europe”, “North America” and “Other areas” options. Overall, according to the table total amount of British tourists travelling abroad increased by about 30% from 22072 people to 28822 in the span of 5 years, while according to the bar chart, the main destination of tourists along the whole period predominantly was western Europe.
Table shows that, 5 out of 7 UK citizens travelled abroad to spend their holidays, while 2 out of 7 travelled abroad due to the business and in order to visit their relatives abroad or due to other reasons.
It is important to mention that, according to the bar chart, the ratio of UK tourists travelling destination stayed the same across the whole period of 5 years.  6 out of 7 UK tourists travelled to western Europe countries, while only 1 out of 7 tourists travelled to North American region and other areas.

It is believed by some, that getting to know lives of our past predecessors has no meaning for the way we live at the present. This essay completely disagrees with that and believes that learning the history of the past helps people of the present to understand mistakes that was done to avoid them, and it is important to honor achievements and good deeds done by predecessors.
Humanity has done many mistakes in the past and many tragic events occurred such as world wars because of those mistakes. It is important for the modern society to learn and remember those horrible wars and mistakes that led to them, to prevent it happening again. For example, two World Wars are the most tragic and atrocious geopolitical catastrophes in the history of the humanity, that resulted in millions of lives lost from both sides of conflict. That is why, countries that suffered the most from this war, teach their students at school the details of these events for them to understand that war is pointless and to not repeat mistakes of their grandparents.
Moreover, history of the humanity knows many great intellectuals that shaped the flow of the future by their genius scientific discoveries and invention. Modern people should know and honor Alan Turing the man, who invented the computer they use every day and Edward Jenner, who created vaccines that save lives of hundreds of millions of children each year. By understanding how the humanity evolved and developed in the past will help the humanity at the present to modernize faster and reach new peaks at the technological and scientific development.
In conclusion, to learn and honor the lives of people of the past is crucial to the people of the present to avoid their mistakes and develop in scientific and technological fields.