IELTS Mock Test 2023 August Writing Practice Test 3

The above line graph depicts the value of money in trade for China, Japan and the United States during the year between 2004 and 2009. The data is measured in Australian billion dollars.

Overall, it is evident in trade with China the value increased for both imports and exports, whereas, value of trade remained constant in the United States and deals in Japan slightly declined.

Looking at the graph, we can see Australia commerce activities were at 10 billion dollar for exports and 20 billion dollar for Imports. It showed an upward trend during a period of time. While the United States of America shows a balance between Imports and Exports trading activities over the years.

Furthermore, In Japan Australia's trade was at 20 billion dollar in 2004 but exports was slightly upward in the following years and was at peak in 2008, as it was just below 40 billion dollars. However, Australia’s trade with America earned constant amount of income through exporting and importing.

A REPORT ON THE BUSINESS BETWEEN BETWEEN CHINA, JAPAN AN THE UNITED STATES FOR A PERIOD OF FIVE YEARS (2004-2009).

First, we are not oblivious of the fact that the major aim of trade is to make profit but however, we can not not rule out the possibility of making loss as well. This chat will explain the above transactions in details.

In 2004, the imports from China was higher than the exports Australia made to them, the exported products' value was around 12 billion dollars while the imports costs about 18 dollars. Both subsequently, grew simultaneously over the years and reached a balance in 2008 where the two weighed about 29 dollars respectively.

Furthermore, the bilateral trade between Australia and Japan, was totally different from the former. Both exports and imports at the start was approximately the same but the cost of exported products continue to appreciate over time and reached its peak in 2008 at about 40 billion dollars, after that, there was a sharp decline while imports maintained a steady flow till after 2007 when it increased and appreciated the most in 2008 for around 22 dollars.

On the other hand, the business between USA and Australia, the import and export maintained a parallel steady flow. however, the two appreciated systematically over time. they reached their highest level in 2008 and started decreasing together after then till 2009.

In actual fact, old age is a blessing and also a privilege. We are not oblivious of the fact that many people always want to get old but nevertheless, we can not deny the point that this era always come with lots of troubles and ill health. if a number of people argue the point that aging in our current time is completely bad and the rest are of the opinion that old  people's life these days are better than the previous years, I would say that they both have their reasons. in this essay, I will be discussing my own opinion.

First, I would like to repeat what I said by reaffirming that aging in this generation is absolutely good. in the olden times, most countries do not take the welfare of the elderly seriously, this has helped to build up the claim and the argument we are having today. But nowadays, many countries have made their interest known in black and white the importance of making the lives of the old persons in our society better by providing the necessary things needed. For instance, before now, there was few or no much sophisticated equipment in the hospitals and care homes as it is today, things like computerized wheel chairs and the rest of them. Furthermore, life is more easier and enjoying to  the aging majority than it was in the former years.

In contrast, some people have argued that the other side of the coin remained that most elderly people are depressed and abandoned in so many places like the care homes and even family houses owing to the fact that this generation are only concerned with their career and some personal business which take much of their time, neglecting the elderly while some argue that this generation lacks the basic attributes like patience, compassion and good communication skills which is paramount in taking care of the old. However, I still write my points in marbles, that science has made everything much easier and accessible and this single fact has nullified every other opposing claims

In conclusion, being in contrary to the obvious point about how helpful this period has been to the elderly is just like flogging a dead horse. Science and technology has made everything easier and care giving has been introduced in colleges where potential care givers can learn.

The three graphs exhibit the changes in the value of Australian trade with China, Japan, and the United States. These figures use Australian dollars (A$) to compare the value of imports and exports between 2004 and 2009. This essay will summarize all the relevant data, highlight its most pertinent aspects, and bring to light the message the three graphs aim to convey.

At first glance, imports played a more dominant role throughout the 5-year trading period, starting with an average of almost 20 billion Australian dollars. Although there were some fluctuations, they remained constant in the same line of trading value. However, exports manifested an irregular tendency, alternating growths and decreases.

In the first graph, imports and exports displayed a soft and slow growth, with an approximate starting volume of 19 and 12 billion Australian dollars, respectively. However, a notorious asymmetry appeared from 2007 to 2009. Australia sold more national products to China. Consequently, exports overshot imports, reaching a value of more than 31.5 billion Australian dollars. In contrast, Chinese commodities remain under the 30 billion line at a constant pace.

In the second graph, a similar situation as in Figure 1 took place. In this case, Australian exports began with a more privileged position than those from Japan. The trading value of the former surpassed the 20 billion mark, while the latter remained under it. Japanese imports from Australia grew gently until 2007, whereas Nippon exports kept steady. Suddenly, Australian foreign sales climbed abruptly between 2007 and 2008, reaching the 40 billion frontier. In contrast, national inbound trade did not arrive at the 25 billion border. However, exports would then suffer an immediate drop to 30 billion Australian dollars at the end of the period.

Last but not least, the Australian-American trading graph shows imports and exports had regular paces throughout the period. There were no such fluctuations, but there was a clear value gap between imports and exports. The chart demonstrates the purchase of American products Australia undertook, with more than 20 billion Australian billion dollars, rather than 10 billion, as the United States kept doing for almost all the following years. Moreover, the 2007-2008-2009 subperiod revealed a slight increase in imports and exports. Nevertheless, they would return to their original stable ratio slowly..

To sum up, the three figures depict two relevant phenomena. Firstly, they present the Australian imports in a steady growth line, without extraordinary changes. In contrast, the charts exhibit exports as more volatile. Their growth appears to be discontinuous, presenting pointed peaks and soft seesaws generally from 2007 to 2009. However, the general tendency of Australian exports consists of transcending imports and reaching higher trading values. This objective represents the attempts of the Australian economy to grow positively and become financially powerful, to avoid relying on foreign products, and to become a more economically independent country.

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The graphs depict trade volume of Australia,japan and United states between 2004 and 2009.
Furthermore,In case of China both imports and exports have been escalating with a clash in mid 2008,After which imports have shown a constant rate.
However,Japan follows a different trend with exports showing inclination,though imports reamin dormant and steady throughout with slight ups and downs.In addition exports with Japan have illustrated highest values to compare with that of other two countries with an exponential increase from 2007 to 2008 followed by a decline further.Also the value of imports is nowhere at par with imports
Contrarily,trade with United States of America has followed a liner pattern for imports as well as exports,With the least value of exports in all three cases.Along with it the value of imports is far more throughout the time period which is not quite evident in other cases
To sum it up,imports in all cases with an exception of China have been remained constant followed by exports showing inclination with a compromise in united states.

The line charts illustrates the overall trade of Australia with China, Japan and United states over a period which starts in 2004, the values are estimated in terms of Dollars.

As per the trends, the trade between Australia and China have increased from 2004 to 2008. The line suggested that total import was 20 billion dollars and export was 10 billion in 2004. However within 4 years the import was incresed to 30 billion dollars in 2008 which is a significant improvements.

It seems evident that the trade between Australia and Japan remained during the 6 years of period and the value of exports was higher than the imports, which is indicating a higher trade in comparison of other countries such as China and US in a overall period.

The value of exports during 2004 to 2009 was significantly lower than the imports in trade between Australia and US. As per the data, in 2004 the cost of exports were 10 Billion dollars and cost of imports were 20 billion dollars.

The diagrams show the trading value of the australia for the given 5 years with 3 different countries.
Firstly, the trade with china has mostly imported rather than exported. The export started on 10 billion and has been increasing has reached more than 30 billion. For import, the good which has been coming to the country increasing from 2004 to 2008 and then declining going on from 2009.
Secondly, the export with japan has been highest than other country. The both departments started on 20 billion with increase in export. In 2008 there has been increase in both the department for a single year but the import remains the same in the end.
Lastly, With USA. The export started with 20 billion and import with 10 billion on 2004. They have been the same in both department for the next 5 years apart in 2008 which has slightly increase.
In conclusion, there has been increased in both the department in the year 2008 with all three country.