Actual tests in April 22nd, 2023 Writing Task 1 (paper-based): Line Graph
The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
(Actual tests in April 22nd, 2023)
Sample answer:
The given graph illustrates the average number of visitors who visited a museum during the summer and winter seasons of 2003. Overall, it is apparent that the number of visitors was higher during the summer season as compared to the winter season.
During the summer season, the number of visitors started at around 200 and rose sharply to reach a peak of approximately 550,000 in August. Following this, the number declined slightly and ended up at just above 400,000 visitors in September. In contrast, during the winter season, the trend was relatively stable with the number of visitors ranging from just below 150,000 to around 250,000 visitors from December to February.
Looking at the comparison between the two seasons, it is worth noting that the number of visitors in the summer season was around 3-4 times higher than in the winter season. This difference is evident throughout the entire year, with the number of visitors reaching its peak only during the summer season.
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Hello Lilian,
just to clarify your doubt, "Pasteur is famous for pasteurization,a process to make milk and wine safe for consumption" that is what you have suggested.
To this my answer is "Pasteur is not famous for pasteurization, rather its famous for inventing a process which was known as pasteurization.
If the question would have been "Pasteur invented a process, .................... which is famous for making milk and wine safe for consumption" then pasteurization would be the recommended answer because the blank is focusing more on the name.
Hope i helped!!!