IELTS Mock Test 2022 September Writing Practice Test 1
Question list
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
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Writing task 1:
The illustrated table depicts in percentage how many people older than 18 years joined which activity in the years 1990 and 2010 in cities compared to the countryside. Most remarkable is the number of people choosing reading in their free time and the trend to Photography within the time.
First of all, the data shows clearly that reading is the most favorable hobby in both, 1990 and 2010. Whereas in 1990 61% of the people living in city area even 71% of those living outside the city circle were reading books, in 2010 78% of adults red books in both locations.
Secondly the difference between urban and rural places is not really dramatical, except from playing, where almost double the amount of persons from rural areas compared to those from urban ones chose to play games. Anyhow, there is a bigger change from 1990 to 2010. While in 1990 7% and 14% from each area were doing photography in the year 2010 almost double as many chose to take pictures in their free time.
Writing Task 2.
Personally, I see that there are negative effects that are based on showing crime scenes and harmfull pictures on public television, but I disagree with the statement these Information would only end in disadvantages, and therefore, should not be published.
On the one hand, fictional movies that contain an unrealistic storyline of crime and violence might have detrimental consequences. Most of these films are too exallerated and impulsive, show too much violence that can lead to aggressive behavior onesself. For example, the marvel movie "deadpool" shows a tremendous amount of violence happening way to easily, so children could pick up a faster use of that behavior by watching these movies. Anyhow, these kind of film material has a minimal age and parents are in responsibility to explain their children the mediaworld.
On the other hand, news and documentaries have to show the drawbacks of society and life that is happening outside. Topics like rape, murder, harming the environment, remaining actions agains minorities, and others are not nice to see but needed to be seen. Already too many violent actions, for examples rapes by special persons of public or actions against gay or trans people keep being untold. But cases, such as the murder of the trans person "Malte" while the last CSD in Mannheim took place, have to become public so individuals know what to be aware of and change in the society.
Concluding I think media should be a tool to offer us uncensored information so people get to know the truth, and can chose their action based on that knowledge, while it is up to responsible parents to teach their children what is fictional and wrong and what is the bitter truth.
The following table illustrates the proportion of adults spent their spare time by activities which including (reading, animated play and playing and also photography in cities and countrysides in the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall, we can see that, the percentage of population who loves to read were significantly highest in the both categories in period 1995 and 2010. Whereas, for playing, percentage of population who living in urban areas were slightly dip for 21% to 14% in those years. And also seems to no change in rural areas in those years.
Looking into deeper details, percentage of people spents time for animated play in rural areas were decreased for 18% to 14% in 1990 and 2010. In addition, no difference in urban areas in those years.
At last, the dramatic part of this activities were photography in the all across categories.
The percentage of people who spent their time for taking photos in urban areas were to significantly increased for 7% to 17% and 17% to 24%, respectively in both areas in those years.
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Thes table shows the percenage of people how up 18 year old and the activities they do it at the free time between 1990 and 2010 and that in two areas wich are the urban and rural . It is clear from the graph that Animated playing was the same in 1990 and 2010 in Urban area , we can see also that playing in rural area was 26% in the 1990 and 2010 the same percenage shown as well.
According to what is shown the adults how spend free time in playing in urban area was decrise by 7% , and if we take a look in photography in Urban area we will find that it was increased by 10%.
TO sum up , we could say that in 2010 it was the same percenage in both areas for the activitie reading and we can see clearly that in 1990 there was not any same per cant for the urban and rural areas.
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Writing Task#2
Media exposes the reality to make people familiar with their surroundings but Watching Crime reporting and Volant activities can have prohibit impact on society. Everything which have good sides also have bad sides. So, before analyzing both sides we can not take any decision.
If we talk about supportive points then, Unbounded media takes part in improving society by helping the suffered people by raising their voice, exposing corrupts, thefts, robbers and bad people who are becoming danger for society. Media takes crucial part in communicating public needs to government. It keeps us familiar with our surroundings and provides us insights about trends and make us up to date.
On the other hand, Unrestricted media can affect teen agers mental health. Moreover, one of the contributor of social depression and anxiety is media because of hate speeches and negative issues. Furthermore, media can control thinking abilities for instance you watch a horror movie at night then your thoughts will shape according to it. This means that surfing negative content effects your Mind capability.
Media can also cause psychological problems in society but also helps us in raising voice and improving societies. Therefore, In conclusion I think pros of having unrestricted media are higher than cons so Unrestricting would be better choice.
Task#1:
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Above given table illustrate the trends of different activities in urban and rural areas on the period between 1990 and 2010.
While on differentiating 1990 and 2010 urban and rural free time activities, I analyze that urban and rural image capturing and reading trends were
incremented after a year while on the other hand. Animated play in cities and playing in villages faced decline. Providing brief comparison below.
Habit of reading rose up from 17%(61% to 78%) while photography by 10%(7 to 17%) in urban areas but rural areas incremented by 7%(71%
to 78%) in reading while 10%(14% to 24%) for photography between 1990 to 2010.
On pointing Animated play, it loosed interest in villages accordingly. In urban areas it started and ended up with 10% with 0% growth
but villages declined interest by 4% (18% to 14%).
Lastly, playing games in rural areas retained the same interest with 26% but urban areas face 7% of decline(21% to 14%).
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The table provides information about the number of people who enjoy spending time in four different leisure activities between rural and urban areas from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that reading has always been the most liked activities for both the areas over 20 years. On the other hand, photography was the least appreciated activity in 1990, but it has been substituted by animated plays in 2010.
In 1990 reading was the most interested activity, with 61% of urban people and 71% of rural ones enjoying it. These numbers increased up to 78% for both areas in 2010. The percentage of people who liked animated play was just of 10% and it remained the same through these years regarding urban areas. While, among the rural people the percentage slightly decrease from 18% to 14%.
Photography steadily increased, starting from 7% and 14% in urban and rural areas, respectively, and they both gained an additional 10%. The percentage of people participating in playing has remained the same over 20 years in rural area, that is 26%, while it lost 7% starting from 21% in urban zone.
Medea has a large influence in our community. In a costly country, every house has one television, or I know people who have one phone per family. Therefore, it must be restricted from being shown in the media. In my opinion, the media must be restricted from being shown in the media because it helps decline crime and murder.
The being with what some people with tirridle monotinal healthy adle to see news as well as be motivated to do the same immediately, such as, I saw a video about the history of the young men with sindrom dayna, and also people hate him.
Sometimes he watches on TV how in England someone killed people in school so he bought a gun, and I start killing people in coffee shops in Australia. I found out what kind of information must be restricted from being shown.
It will help our community lessen the large killings of people around the world.
. In addition, it is terrible news how it harms mental health and physical health.
The furmore if alwaus watch terrible news , you will starte awfull conclude
And feir. If media were restricted, it could have grave adverse consequences.
Whatever the violent news on television and in newspapers, it will help people avoid terrible situations. sush as on the news show up what no way is increasing
stole a shoulder bag, so the women who watch this programme will be advised to be clean in their waycase.
To conclude, the volent of the criminal news and tirrble could sometimes help people, hover, and cause awful action, such as murder and another.
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In recent days, despite the advantages and disadvantages, residents have significantly discussed the concern of taking reports of crimes and violent news in the media 's consequences. From my point of view, it gives both consequences, however prone to the negative aspects.
First, I am believed that numerous criminals will be arrested sooner because of the observation of local people if the criminal departs to other areas. Additionally, people can have a new aspect of view concerning violent activities and their awareness will be increased as how the media critical the wrong behaviour.
On the other hand, I strongly assume that some negative influents perhaps appear if parents can not control their children's behaviour. For instance, they can not disguise those activities if it was in the right manner. The kids may copy violent actions. Moreover, the government should restrict the reporting of crimes due to the amount of information about how to operate it. According to statistics from the FBI, 80% of criminals utilised information from the Internet to find several methods to take action and obviously, other innocent residents will be impacted. Alternatively, violent news floating on the internet which people currently day accessed every day will give a depressing view of the future. Therefore, it will be affected remarkably to the next generation.
Conclusively, all issues have their drawbacks and benefits and crime pictures and news is available in the media. Therefore, I do agree with this statement, however, the restrict option is suitable more.
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