IELTS Mock Test 2022 June Writing Practice Test 2

The bar chart illustrate difference evening courses attendance of the number for both male and female while the pie chats shows the number of people enjoy these course aged range under 20 to over 50 at an adult education center for the year 2009.

Overall, language and painting is most popular activities for men and women meanwhile sculpture is most unlike item at all.  Most participants are over 50 but a  few participants are under 20.

Around 25 male join painting course and 20 male is in language. Both drama and sculpture courses are just 10 male.  On the other hand, 40 female take part language and 30 is in painting and 20 is drama, under 10 female join sculpture course.

Finally, 42% participants are over 50 ages and 26% is aged between 40-49. Aged between 30-20 are under 20%, just 5% people are under 20.

Writing part 1

The bar chart details the amount of people that attended four different evening courses at an adult education center in 2009, grouped separately by men and women. The pie chart classifies these same students according to their age group.

It can be noticed that, with the exception of the sculpture course, the rest of the courses were attended by more women than men. Regarding the students' ages, the trend was so that the older the age group was, the more the attendance.

There was twice the number of women attending Drama and Language than there were men, with 20 women taking Drama and double this number taking Language. Men were also behind in numbers in Painting, although there was only a slight difference: 25 men versus 30 women.

Regarding age, over 40% of the atendees were 50 years old or over, while only 5% were aged under 20. People between the ages of 20 to 29 were barely one out of ten, while people between the ages of 40 to 49 were slightly over one quarter of the total.

Same-sex marriage is still a controversial issue. Some people followed suit thinking that this would greatly affect society, but on the contrary, others thought it was just a natural tendency and chose this type of marriage as valid.

In my opinion, I am completely against same-sex marriage. Firstly, two physiologically similar people cannot combine to create a baby, which greatly affects the population growth. Secondly, it will affect the psychology of people who are in adulthood because they think that it is the right behavior plus the permission of the government that will cause the rate of same-sex marriage to increase, leading to an increase in the rate of same-sex marriage. followed by a decrease in the birth rate. Not only has a strong impact on population growth, but it will also makes the development of society go in a completely different direction. When the majority is in favor, everyone will go along. Then ordinary people are corrupted, the consequences are foretold, the world will stop producing people and society will gradually decline.

According to some conceptions, love knows no age and defies all limits, but for same-sex marriage, this concept does not work. Because all animals on earth including humans have to fall in love and have offspring to enrich that species's gene pool, but same-sex marriage prevents that from happening.

Therefore, it is concluded that the government should stop facilitating same-sex marriage because it not only reduces the population, but can also have a misleading impact on the perception of young people.

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The given bar chart provides information about the number of people from different gender that are enrolled in an adult education center and attend multiple evening courses, namely drama , painting, sculpture and language. Along with a pie chart representing the age group of the participants. Overall, it can be seen that, the main activity for women is learning a new language on the contrary to men that prefer painting moreover these classes are mostly attended by generation X.
To begin with, all the courses are dominated by women more than men except the sculpture. The main reason is that The total females enrolled in the center is higher than males. Language is the most appreciated course with 60 peole attending it. Followed by painting (50 participants),and most preferred by men , subsequently drama with a sum of 30 individuals, and finally sculpture with a number of 15 students.
On the other hand, most people attending the evening classes are 50 years old or over it ,and there are also some groups between 40 and 49 yo representing a quarter of the pie , and between 30 and 39 yo ( 16% ) or 20 and 29yo (11%) , however generation alpha constitute a small proportion accounted for one in twenty( 5%).

Gay marriage is a theme that still make people discuss, even if nowadays it’s legal in most of the western countries there are a lot of people who judge these unions as against nature, moreover there are many countries that stll punish gay people because of religious ideologies.

First of all, we can state that countries where homosexual couples are forbidden are generally those where culture is generally really influenced by religion or by ideas of conservative people. These factors push people to fear the idea of gay marriage because of some really old beliefs which saw homosexuality as linked with something immoral.
Although these opinions are very common in many different societies, rationality is slowly prevaling and people are starting to understand that there’s nothing wrong in gay marriages.
The most important point that can be stated to support gays’right to the marriage is that it’s something personal that doesn’t affect other people in a negative way. Therefore homosexuals should be free to show their union with another person and it should be protected their possibility to see legally recognized their status.
Concerning people who live in countries that have already accepted gay marriage but who personally refuse to judge it as a real marriage, we can just say that these opinions are often the consequence of a particular rigid education or ignorance.

In conclusion we can affirm that probably in the future there will be freedom for all gay people to get married, it’s just a question of time for people to accept the fact that these sort of events won’t change the society in a negative way and to understand that a marriage of other people can’t disturb you in any way.

The graphs that have been taken into consideration show some informations about people attending evening courses in 2009, datas presented here reveal the relation between the sex of the students and the class they have chosen, moreover there are informations on the age of these people.
The bar chart, puts in evidence the fact that in every course women are more than men except in sculpture class, which is also the less attended course. Language is the most appreciated subject, with almost 60 people attending it, whereas painting class is the second most popular course and it’s at the same time the one prefered by men.
Concerning the ages of the students, these informations are presented in the pie chart, and we can see that generally most of the people attending the evening courses are over 50 years old, then there are also some groups between 40 and 49 years , 26%, or between 30 and 39,16%.
Young people under 20 years represent just 5% of the total attendance.

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