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[tran d] Writing Practice Test 452934

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Let's take a look at electricity generation pollution level. China is the most polluted with almost 60 PPM, because it's population is about 1.3 billion, higher than any countries else. After it is America, where pollution is a half of China, about 30 PPM. Meanwhile, in Japan the level is about 15 PPM, in Australia is almost 20 PPM.

Now let's move to transport pollution level. In China, it's about 70 PPM, higher than America with about 58 PPM. In Japan, it's about 30 PPM and in Australia, 20 PPM.

Now the last one, industry. Industry is the highest pollution level in China, with 80 PPM. Meanwhile, in America, it's about 29 PPM. It's even better than Japan with about 42 PPM. And in Australia, it's about 19 PPM.

In conclusion, China has the highest air pollution level, meanwhile Australia is the least. About the reason? It is due to the population, the used of natural energy and the most important is, what does the economic in that country depend on.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In many year, smoking has been dangerous and it is a major problem. Even the affect of smoking is well known all over the world, many people still continued on this bad and harmful habit.

In my opinion, the causes of this is the past. So why the past affect this? There is one thing that many people don't know that when tobaccos was created, nobody knew that tobaccos could poison them.

So no government banned this. Until they discovered that tobaccos could kill them, it was too late. Because many people were smoking that time so the government couldn't stop them. Especially after the bad tieme of the USA, the number of smoking people increased a lot. So that's why now, many people is doing this habit, use it one or two times a day. And the government in the past didn't actions enough to reduce this number. We would see that in the past, the government didn't do much to stop smoking. We can see that even Roosevelt, the 32nd USA president

from 1933 to 1945 still smoked. ​

So how can we reduce smoking in society? The answer is easy to find out. We can create many program to make every one know that smoking is bad and harmful to our body, increase the price of the tobaccos. For example, Australia increased the price of tobacco to reduce the number of people who smoke. But that won't reduce much. It's also depend on the strong of these program, we need to make sure that people who stopped smoking won't smoke again, or all of our effort fall down!

In conclusion, the caused of this is the past and to reduce smoking, we can create many program to avoid people from smoking, for instance. I hope that noone will smoke in the future!

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