[AJAY S] Writing Practice Test 677007

The pie chart depicts the statistics of the UAE government expenditures in 2000. The overall budget allotted by the government was AED 315 billion.

Overall, the gulf countries spent a quarter of their money on social security and the least contribution on transportation.

It is clear from the graph that social security bags first with AED 100 billion. Moreover, the second-highest part of the money spent on health and personal services tends to be half of the social security around 53 billion. Then the UAE government spent an identical amount of money on both dept interest and extra expenditure, which turns out to be AED 23 billion.

The government used 22 billion on defence. Therefore it is lesser than the dept interest of the nation. Furthermore, 45 million AED contributes to housing, law and order, industry, agriculture and employment. The appreciable amount of AED 38 million was spent on education. Finally, the UAE government had not concentrated on the transport facilities. Thus, they contributed only 9 million AED and it is the least spent portion among all.

The contemporary society that people are living in today has focused more on education. Therefore, due to this enormous development, various questions arise such as, Do students focus only on restricted subjects or they can explore a wide range of courses? In this essay, I'm going to shed light on the advantages of both views, along with my opinion.

To begin with, the most positive outcome of the students who are acquiring knowledge from limited subjects excel in their respective fields. For example, A child who studies science as their major for 15 years will be familiar with all the compounds and it will promote them as a knowledgable research scientist. Moreover, the time for preparation gets increased. Thus, the students feel light weighted on their minds.

On the other hand, the broad range of subjects also has a lot of advantages. It helps the students in their elementary studies because pupils on these ages should learn an enormous amount of basics on each subject. It might assist them to draw a picture of their future interests. For instance, if a student came across a limited amount of courses they don't receive any idea about the wider world, on contrary to this the students who are educating a wide range of subjects can get a clear perspective about thier future interests. Moreover, students can also develop their intellectual power when a wide range of topics are learned. They can become better realizers in their higher studies.

In conclusion, both the pattern of learning has a tremendous advantage, but in my opinion, the extensive range of learning will be the better option for elementary students. By studying a variety of subjects one can decide their future path easily when compared to others.