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[Bach N] Writing Practice Test 656032

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The diagram illustrates the expenditures of gamers divided into four distinct types of videos games from a period of 2000 to 2006.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is clearly depicted that all three kinds of games which represent mobile phone games, online games and handheld games are performing a consistent uptrend.

To begin with, the handheld type of game is accounted for the major part of the amount of spending on videos games while almost double the figure for console games from the commencing in 2000. Continuing the period, the number has dramatically risen by approximately four billion dollars, although some stagnation has appeared in 2005 but then reaching a peak of 18 billion of dollars at the final of the period which being the highest milestone of number in all period.

Commencing with the chart, console games which are considered as the second favorite on the list of spending witnessed a steady downtrend while starting with exactly 6 billion dollars, the hectic performance leads the figure consistently declined and end up at around 3 billion dollars in 2006 which is about half of the initial number. Online games and mobile games which have the first appearance on the diagram in 2001 and 2002 respectively steeply rise with a similar trend.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Bullying is a big problem in many schools.

What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In today's modern society, schools have become the utmost vital environment that not only provides the most suitable education for the children or the juveniles, it also facilitates the development of adolescents. However, one of the biggest deterrents of the growth process that could have the possibility of causing both physical and mental issues is bullying. The report is conducted and assumes that more and more bullies are increasing over time in the scholarly system. While some reasons can be identified to explain this situation of bullying, there are policies that could be adopted to tackle this issue.

First and foremost, there are a variety of causes are attributed to various factors that are tightly correlated to this issue. One fundamental reason for this is that the majority of minors who committed a behavior of bullying others do not receive sufficient consideration, care as well as education from either the school or the parents. Many psychology experts assume that parents' attitudes are one of the major parts that determine their child's personality. For instance, if in a family where violence is abusing between members, or even worst that the child is one of the victims, that will not affect only their mental health which is during the children's puberty but also lead to the copy of action to release all their stress and tension directly to their classmate - in which identified as bullying. In addition, due to the bloom of advanced technologies, a new type of bullying that call cyberbullying. In other words, online acts through the help of the digital networks can be expressed through words, which in some cases, it can become more hazardous than affecting the physical one along with the disruption of social networks such as Instagram, Facebook, or Snapchat. To put it in a nutshell, the environment of habitat, education, people are all the crucial parts that will lead to the bad behavior of the juveniles.

Bullying now is committed more prevalent and becomes a headache for not only the parents involved but also for the institution of their education. To put an end to this issue, measures must be taken to solves the puzzles. Firstly, individuals that take charge of the raise are obliged to educate themself about their actions as well as attitudes that will negatively affect the development of their own children. For instance, parents must be knowledged about the consequences along with the prohibition of their action of abusing harmful violence concerned other members in the household. Additionally, parents are highly recommended to collaborate with schools pursuing the goal of emphasizing the hazardous effects of bullying on both mental and physical by organizing educational campaigns or some special classes toward directly to this problem.

As such it can be concluded that family plays a vital role in the emergence of bullies and there are a plethora of causes that lead to this situation of abusing and bullying. As for solutions, parents and schools should engage together in the education of the adolescents as well as the psychological treatments are needed for the juveniles.

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