The first chart describes the average monthly spend in pounds on children's sports by British parents between 2008 and 2014. The second chart illustrates children in a million who participated in three sports( football, athletics, and swimming) in Britain between 2008 and 2014.

Overall, the first chart shows the average monthly spend on children's sports increased between 2008 and 2014. The second chart the highest participation of children was in football sport in over the period, and lower participation in general in athletics and swimming.

The first chart shows in 2018 the average monthly spending on children's sports was 20 pounds then increased in 2010 to 25 pounds. The line chart increased the money spent by the parents to around 27 pounds in 2012. Finally, the highest average spending on children's sports was around 31 pounds monthly.

The second chart shows the highest participation was around 8 million children in 2008 and increased to around 9 million children participation in football sport. Regarding swimming in 2008 below 2.5 million children and increased to around 3 million in 2014. The lowest sports participation among children in 2008 was in athletics was only around 1 million children which increased to 5 million children in 2014.

The first line chart illustrate how much money was spent on to the children by their parents in the United Kingdom from 2008 to 2014. The second one represents the number of British kids participated in football, athletics and swimming over the same period.
The average monthly funding on children’s sports rose gradually from 20 pounds to over 30 pounds across the timeframe. Similarly, the trend of swimming also increased steadily. The number of children who played football remained reasonable stable, which far outstriped than that of two other sports. In contrast, the number of children who played athletics remained more or less the same till 2010 and it skyrocketed and overtook that of swimming before it receded in 2014.
There were around 8 to 9 millions of young people participating in football between 2008 and 2014. The number of children participating in other two sports were much fewer. Comparing the number of children who participated in swimming in 2008 to that of 2014, it rose by 2 millions in total to roughly 4 millions in 2014. Originally less than 1 million of kids participated in athletics before 2010, however, it grew significantly to over 5 millions in 2012 before it receded slightly two years later.

The first line chart illustrate how much money was spent on to the children by their parents in the United Kingdom from 2008 to 2014. The second one represents the number of British kids participated in football, athletics and swimming over the same period.
The average monthly funding on children’s sports rose gradually from 20 pounds to over 30 pounds across the timeframe. Similarly, the trend of swimming also increased steadily. The number of children who played football remained reasonable stable, which far outstriped than that of two other sports. In contrast, the number of children who played athletics remained more or less the same till 2010 and it skyrocketed and overtook that of swimming before it receded in 2014.

the first chart illustrates how much british parents spent on their children's sporting activities from 2008 to 2014, while the second one gives information on how many children participated in football, athletics and swimming in the same period

overall, there was a consistent increase in the average expenditure of British parents on their children's sports over the given period. In addition, three examined sports all saw a rise in the number of participants, with the most significant rise being seen in  the figure for athletics, and football was constantly by far the most popular sport

Looking at the first chart, in 2008, on average, British parents spent 20 pounds monthly on their children's sports. Then, the spending figure rose steadily throughout the period, reaching just over 30 pounds in 2014

In terms of the remaining chart, in 2008, football attracted the largest number of participants, at a massive 8 million children, compared to  2,5 million for swimming and a mere 1 million for athletics. Over the following years, the figure for football and swimming participation saw a small rise, to 9 million and to 3 million respectively in 2004, whereas the figure for atheletics grew sharply to nealrly 5 million in 2004, five times as many as its 2008 figure

The line charts on the top showed how much money that British parents spent on their children's sports from 2008 to 2014. The line charts below described the number of children participating in three different sports (Football, Athletics, and Swimming) in Britain over seven years.  Overall, it was abundantly clear that the amount of money that parents spent on children's sports increased every single year. In addition, Football was the most favorite sport for British children from 2008 to 2014.

Taking the first graphs into consideration, the parents average monthly spent on kids' sports steadily increased by 5 pounds every year. In other words, it grew almost 15 pounds from 2008 to 20014.

Moving to the second chart, the participation of British children steadily grew from 7.5 million in 2008 to around 9 million in 2014. This condition was also followed by swimming which increased by almost 1 million participants from 2008 to 2014 or becoming 3.5 million participants in 2004. On the other hand,  the athletics sport was a little bit fluctuating. Increased significantly from 2010 to 2012 or reached 5 million participants, but in the next year, the participation slightly dropped to less than 5 million.

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The line graphs illustrate the amount of sterling pounds disburse in kids' sports every month, in line with the quantity of children join in different types of sports (football, athletics and swimming) in the years 2008 and 2014 in Britain.

Overall, it can be seen that there is continuous upward trend of expenditure on children's sport by their parents in . According to the study, Football is the main sport that most of the kid's participate
Athletics outnumbered the swimming sport at the end of the period.

From 20 pounds in year 2008, there is constant increase of pay out of parents of kids' in their recreational activities, around 25 to 28 pounds in between 2010 to 2012, then reach its peak to about 32 pounds in year 2014.

Meanwhile, the other line graph comprises of the sports the children participated in 6 years time. Foot ball marked the most popular activities that from about 8 millions, it consistently stabilize and went up slightly to almost 9 million. Athletics category fluctuates its number but reached almost 5 million in 2014. Lastly, swimming has an upward trend from about 2.3 million constantly increasing up to around 3 million, however, athletics sports still outnumbered swimming.

Nowadays, it has become a general trend for people to experience risky and adventurous sports such as Sky diving, skiing. Some people believe that these extreme sports should not be encouraged and to be banned which has led to injuries and fatal accidents. In my opinion, I believe that these sports should not be banned and proper care needs to be taken in terms of security and training.

Firstly, adventurous sports have gained an interest from people in recent years. From their busy schedule and office stress people want to enjoy their time by experiencing such sports activities to refresh their mind. Lack of security is one of major issue which have caused accidents. Organisations which are offering these sports should ensure proper care in terms of individual’s health condition, safety kits and weather conditions.

Furthermore, I believe people should get a genuine training from organisations which are sponsoring these sports. An individual should go through a 3-5 days of training course. Government should monitor and authorise few training institutions. Before getting into a proper field a mock test need to be taken and ensure that the participant have passed these tests with decent scores. For example, Dubai has one of the highest sky diving centres in the world. Government in Dubai have made a mandatory to the participants to clear the prerequisites exams before experiencing the sky diving. By this it has achieved to reduce the number of accidents.

To conclude, though the adventurous sports are dangerous they should not be banned instead prior security check and proper training needs to be given for the people who are experiencing these sports.

Extreme sports are widely spread all over the world. Due to high mortality rates as well as the high disabling injuries, some people have been asking the government to ban those activities.
In my view, a ban on these activities will not be the appropriate solution because of two reasons.
Firstly. people enjoy extreme sports, and secondly, the government will have to expand the base to include other sports.
People always crave what they cannot get, that is the reason why a ban on extreme sports will only push people to practice them covertly. This, therefore, will increase the chances of people risking their lives doing extreme sports just to evade government restrictions. This was proven by a study from the University of Rome that came out in 2012, it showed that children, under the age of 10, when denied sweets, risk getting injured.
This gives evidence that people who take part in extreme sports will not be deterred by government restrictions.
The argument for safety can be extended to every human activity and it can be applied to even the mildest form of sports. For instance, the number of people who had to receive knee surgery for playing football exceeds the number of those who had to do it because of skiing. Consequently, the government will have to restrict every form of sports to make sure nobody is hurt.
To conclude, we should give people the freedom to practice whatever sport they like while providing the safety measures they require to be safe

The two graphs illustrate the amount of money spent in pounds by parents in the united kingdom on their children's sports and three different sports that the children took part in respectively, in the period between 2008 and 2014.
In general, the first graph demonstrates a continuous and steady increase in expenditure while the second graph shows diverse data about the preferences of the children.

the first graph shows that in 2008 the average amount of money spent on sports was 25 which increased by 5 pounds every two years consequently it reached 25 pounds in 2010 and almost 30 pounds in 2012. This trend is expected to be maintained as the money spend in 2014 will reach 35.

The second graph shows that participation in football maintained it is position as the most practiced sport throughout the six years with 8  9 million participants.
while the number of participants who practiced swimming escalated in a steady way, athletics showed a significant increase after 2010 as demonstrated by the graph it remained below 2.5 millions , rose rapidly between 2010 and 2012 as it reached 5 millions.