Firstly, your writing style is too similar to Vietnamese literature, which is "roundabout", and "too long", which is not needed in ielts. Also, your structure is too messy but you have a great vocabulary. Secondly in ielts is not allowed to use abbreviations like "etc", Finally is about the grammar you need to practice more. I think I'll give you 1.5
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https://ieltsonlinetests.com/vi/sot/result/speaking-practice-test-1-395636
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i am florentino
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https://ieltsonlinetests.com/vi/wot/result/writing-practice-test-1-342938
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https://ieltsonlinetests.com/vi/wot/result/writing-practice-test-1-400828 rate my writing task two, thanks alot
Firstly, your writing style is too similar to Vietnamese literature, which is "roundabout", and "too long", which is not needed in ielts. Also, your structure is too messy but you have a great vocabulary. Secondly in ielts is not allowed to use abbreviations like "etc", Finally is about the grammar you need to practice more. I think I'll give you 1.5
zootube
https://ieltsonlinetests.com/vi/sot/result/speaking-practice-test-1-182534
Check for me please