It is considered by many people a good thing for every child to master a musical instrument. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will discuss, the advantages of learning a musical instrument, and how learning it is a choice and not a duty.
In the first place, playing a musical instrument has been proven to have great effects on the persons mentality and academic skills. To put it simply, mastering a instrument makes the person smarter. For example, children who can play a instrument tend to have better grades than those who do not. Moreover, it helps relieve stress and can be a big advantage on college application. This can be seen in number of students who can play a musical instrument, and who have gotten accepted to top universities around the world. Hence, it is recomended for children to master at least one musical instrument.
In the meantime, whether learning it or not depends on the interests and hobbies of the child. In other words, it is not a mandatory thing that every single child must learn. For instance, some children like music, therefore, they pick up a music instrument. Meanwhile, the others like sports or martial arts, in this case, it would be wrong to make the child learn a instrument. As you can see, before deciding things for the children we must ask about their hobbies and interests.
To summarize, it is true that learning a musical instrument has numerous advantages, such as good grades and admissions into top universities. Neverthless, some children like doing other things like sports and martial arts. Due to this reason, people must not force every child to learn a instrument.
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It is considered by many people a good thing for every child to master a musical instrument. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will discuss, the advantages of learning a musical instrument, and how learning it is a choice and not a duty.
In the first place, playing a musical instrument has been proven to have great effects on the persons mentality and academic skills. To put it simply, mastering a instrument makes the person smarter. For example, children who can play a instrument tend to have better grades than those who do not. Moreover, it helps relieve stress and can be a big advantage on college application. This can be seen in number of students who can play a musical instrument, and who have gotten accepted to top universities around the world. Hence, it is recomended for children to master at least one musical instrument.
In the meantime, whether learning it or not depends on the interests and hobbies of the child. In other words, it is not a mandatory thing that every single child must learn. For instance, some children like music, therefore, they pick up a music instrument. Meanwhile, the others like sports or martial arts, in this case, it would be wrong to make the child learn a instrument. As you can see, before deciding things for the children we must ask about their hobbies and interests.
To summarize, it is true that learning a musical instrument has numerous advantages, such as good grades and admissions into top universities. Neverthless, some children like doing other things like sports and martial arts. Due to this reason, people must not force every child to learn a instrument.
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Hi, I'm trying to register but when it gets to how best would you describe yourself e.g. student..... I click my choice and press enter but it won't upload and keeps asking me to choose one. I look forward to your response.
Big thank you to this website. Today I sat for my IELTS test after preparing with you. I wish whoever works on updating this website would read my comment. This site has the best design and it mimics the real IELTS test accurately yet I want to make few notes hoping that you would improve the website for future users:
1. There are many spelling and punctuation mistakes in the texts, they need to be revised.
2. There are some spelling mistakes in the KEY ANSWER!
3. Most keys do not have all the possible answers for example 2 m = 2 metres = two metres
4. Some keys do not follow the question instructions like (only three words) yet the key will contain numbers
5. Most Listening recordings are unrealistic, accents are forced and they sound funny. Nothing like real IELTS.
6. Listening tests now do not include an example at the beginning
I volunteer to help, if possible. Please send me an e-mail if you accepted my offer. Thank you.
Pls review my writing passage and share your valuable feedback )
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