IELTS Mock Test 2024 - September

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Task 1
The graph gives data on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) for two Australian cities. In Brisband, maximum temperature is more than 25°C and minimum temperature is more than 20°C in January, maximum temperature is 30°C and minimum temperature is 20°C in February, maximum temperature is 25°C and minimum temperature is less than 20°C in March, maximum temperature is more than 20°C and minimum temperature is more than 15°C in April, maximum temperature is less than 25°C and minimum temperature is less than 15°C in May, maximum temperature is more than 20°C and minimum temperature is more than 10°C in June, maximum temperature is more than 20°C and minimum temperature is 10°C in July, maximum temperature is more than 20°C and minimum temperature is 10°C in August, maximum temperature is less than 25°C and minimum temperature is less than 15°C in September, maximum temperature is more than 25°C and minimum temperature is more than 15°C in October, maximum temperature is less than 30°C and minimum temperature is less than 20°C in November and maximum temperature is less than 30°C and minimum temperature is 20°C in December. Temperature drops from May to June and then increases back up.
In Canberra, maximum temperature is more than 25°C and minimum temperature is less than 15°C in January and February, maximum temperature is less than 25°C and minimum temperature is more than 10°C in March, maximum temperature is less than 20°C and minimum temperature is more than 5°C in April, maximum temperature is more than 15°C and minimum temperature is less than 5°C in May, maximum temperature is more than 10°C and minimum temperature is more than 0°C in June and July, maximum temperature is less than 15°C and minimum temperature is more than 0°C in August, maximum temperature is more than 15°C and minimum temperature is less than 5°C in September, maximum temperature is 20°C and minimum temperature is more than 5°C in October, maximum temperature is less than 25°C and minimum temperature is less than 10°C in November and maximum temperature is more than 25°C and minimum temperature is more than 10°C in December. Temperature dips from February to July and after that, shows an up. Average temperature in Brisband is higher than Canberra throghout the years.
The chart describes information on the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. In Brisbane, 13 days in January, 14 days in February and March, 12 days in April, 10 days in May, 7 days in June, July, August and September, 8 days in October, 10 days in November and 12 days in December showing a decrease from April to September. In Canberra, 7 days in January and February, 8 days in March, 7 days in April and May, 10 days in June, July and August, 8 days in September, 10 days in October, 7 days in November and December portraying an up and down pattern. Brisband draws more rainfall days than Canberra.

Task 2
An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance which means more people are choosing to have operation to change the way they look. I think it is a positive development.
People are doing cosmetic operations because looks matter in everday's lives. If you just look at celebrities, they are pretty or good-looking, yes with the fact that some of them might go under surgery themselves. When you are ugly or less facily attractive, it impacts a negative effect on factors such as popularity, nailing jobs and finding someone to marry. Yet, it may cost a large amount of money to pay for those surgeries because they tend to be costly. Some people might sacrifice a lion's share of their income for them. I am not saying spending so much money on them is bad but is it really worth it though?
From medical point of view, it is a positive development in surgery practices. However, some might see it as negative because they no longer have natural face and oppose against it. Some of the communities may advice against it. It is fortunate if you were born with natural beauty. But, if you are not blessed with such beauty, how many choices do you have to enhance your features? I guess it is not much. You chose to undergo operation decided by many environmental influences from people around you such as fiances, family and friends because they play a big role in your life.