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[Chedy S] Writing Practice Test 551136

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The table illustrates the yearly salaries of secondary/high school back in 2009.

Overall Australia offers the lowest starting salary while Luxembourg in the other hand provide the highest starting and maximum wage. . Australia and denmark provide the maximum salaries pretty quickly compared to their counter parts.

Australia, korea and japan offers the lowest starting salaries them being respectively 28,000, 30,000, 34,000 while denmark increase that by a bit over 10,000 to 45,000, while Luxembourg being at the top with 80,000.

after 15 years of employment things change a bit however australia and korea are left behind with the same salary in between them that is 48,000 denmark in the other hand leaves it's spot for japan after increasing slightly to 54,000 that skyrockets to 65,000.Luxembourg keeps the lead with a wage of 119,00.

Australia and denmark reach their maximum in just 9,8 years respectively being the lowest in terms of time in the group to reach it wtih the same salary mentionned above sitting right before korea that gives 62,000 after 34 years of service,moreover japan is seeing being at top2 with a wage of 86,000 after 37 years of work, and finally luxembourg as always is the first in the group in terms of salary that is 132,000 offered after 30 years of employment.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Media as a hole has a big role and impact on our societies, however leaving positive advancements a side and focusing on emergencies and problems in general in their news reports could have some negative impact for the people and the society. In this essay we'll discuss if that's the case or it's shouldn't be that important.

Keeping people updated about what's going on in the world is the media's role, they should let everyone be aware of specially big worldwide events or even at a national level taking for example covid-19 which is pretty recent, they made a really good job on explaining every aspects of this virus starting from it's symptoms to why we should avoid social gatherings, they did aswell advertise it's vaccines and why we sholud take the shot as soon as we can, they should mention different bad actions from time to time such as theft in order to raise awarness specially between teenagers.

Focusing only on the bad side of the world could lead to the society to collapse as a results of a lack of trust, we would end up with an enclosed society which will result in hate crimes just like what's happening in the united states of america after the covid pandemic, people from asian origins have been receiving a lot of hate in general that being physical or verbal.

I partially agree with the fact that news reports prioritizing problems and emergencies however I think thatr positive developments should not be missed and instead they have be put in the spot light.

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