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[Quang Tue N] Writing Practice Test 506907

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

We could clearly see that for overseas students, the ratio of total enrolments and commencing is somewhat smaller than local students.

To be more specific, for example in the year 2001 ammount of commencing overseas students is somewhere around ~57%. Meanwhile for local students it's somewhere around ~32%. If we do the maths then it will be around ~25% different compare the two charts. But then if we look again, we could noticed that for overseas student. The ammount of commencing and total students are going up evenly. In contrast for local students, not only it doesn't go evenly, the commencing rate compare to the total students is very unstable wit the peak comes in 2002 and the lowest drop was in 2006.

In conclusion, the ammount of overseas student to enrolls in Australian universities is greatly increasing by the time goes with higher commencing rate by time. The same goes with local students but the only difference is that the commencing rate of local students is not as stable as overseas.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

International sports event is something that's very common in the past century, a lots of events with many sports and participations of almost every country in the wolrd. This essay will cover some of the foremost part of it which contains both the bad and good side base on some of the opinions.

For most of us know, there is a lot of famous international sports event such as World Cup (Football), NBA (Basketball), MLB (Baseball), etc. The couldn't deny the fact that these events has made oppurtunity for many athletes all around the world such as profits, fames or maybe chance to learning. Not only for athlete, these types of events also made a huge impact on daily lives. Sometimes it'll be like a seed to grow inside a child whenever they watch it. That'll make dreams and hope for the childe, giving them early motivions for their future. Sports event is also a encouragement to for people to train themselves for a better health.

Now for the bad side, as long as we knew sports could be very dangerous. Once you're on a match, injuries are inevitable for your growth. But sometimes, only sometimes, it might be the last time you play. Injuries are inevitable, but the chance you'll never recover its not 0. There's a lot of tragic accident occured on field before, some became disabled or became permanantly injured. And for some it might be their last moments...

International sports event is playing an important role in our daily lives, not only for entertainments but it's also many oppurtunity to change their life. It could be danger as we all know, the costs could be injuries or sometimes your own life. But the chance of that to occur is very slim so we don't have to be worry too much about it. I'm not a sport lover and I also don't like to play sports, but since it's important for a normal person to train their health then sports is something that you need. Maybe not much, but rather enough for you

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