[Nurali M] Writing Practice Test 219454

The diagram illustrates how raw water is being transformed into carbonated drinks.

In this text I am looking forward to thoroughly explain you the diagram below.

Overall, the process consists of 5 stages. There are: water cleaning, carbonation, mixing, filtering and filling, packaging.

First of all, raw water is passing through filter into water softener and chemicals. Secondly softened water goes along pump toward electroc heaters. Which is connected to container by cooling pipe, that mixes cooled water and carbon dioxide. Thirdly, carbonated water passes through another pipe right in the direction of through to mixing tank. Mixing tank containes three various vessels: colouring, syrup, flavour. This apparatus blends carbonated water with those subtances, which are being held in vessels. Lastly, mixed water goes via filter. Final stage is filtering water and filling it into bottles and cans. They are being packaged into boxes. Finally special transport perfoms the delivery to different supermarkets.

Most of current adults have an opinion that development of childrent should mainly consist of ourdoor activities, rather than computer games, due to its advantages. Without a doubt, I totally agree with this statement and I will support my opinion with various facts.

In one hand, we live in the era of technologival development. So, children have an opportunity to enjoy its advances. Most of the young people spend their times surfing the Internet, because of its convinience. The current generation experiences the significant improvement of simplicity of our lives. They adjusted to this convinience and don't want to escape the ease of their daily activities. The lack of activities can cause diverse disorderes. For instance, cardiac insufficiency can be caused by inactiveness. To avoid it we have to force them to do sports by prohibition of using several devices, which are making them addictive.

On the other hand, playing computer games that help them to improve their social skills, by playing numerous games that require competiveness and teamwork. As an example, I used to play the game Counter Strike, which mainly consisted of talking to your team and creating different tactics in order to win game. By playing games, they can develop in themselfes countless characteristics, which can be valuable in their future life. As an example, games can improve brain speed, reaction, problem-solving skills, concentration. Hence, this shows that outdoor activities and computer games have their own pros and cons. Due to this fact, we should let children to play computer as well as doing sports.