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[Gey M] Writing Practice Test 552501

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The bar chart shows the levels of air pollution in four countries that caused by different factors in the year of 2021. The figure shows different trends for each different country.

According to the data, China have the highest level of air pollution compared to other country, the greatest factor of the air pollution in China is caused by industry with 80 parts per million, followed by transport and electric generation (between 70 to 60 part per million, respectively).

In America, the major cause of air pollution is transport with around 60 part per million, while in Japan, transport contributes around 30 part per million to the air pollution. Same as China, industry has contributes the most to the air pollution in Japan, even though the number is not as high as in China, with only around 40 part per million.

On the other hand, Australia has the lowest level of air pollution compared to other country listed, with only around 20 part per million for each category, however, the level of air pollution caused by electricity generation in Australia is slightly a bit more higher than in Japan.

Overall, the level of air pollution in China is the highest among other country listed, while Australia has the lowest level air polution with only around 20 parts per million for each factors.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

A lot of people knows the danger of smoking, yet they still continue to smoke. Smoking can caused cancer and other lungs problems, not only for the smokers but also for the people around them. The smokers themself, know exactly the danger that haunts them from smoking, yet they continue to smoke out of habit.

Smoking cigarette and marijuana can be equally dangerous. While joint contains THC, THC is the main psychoactive compound from the cannabis plant itself that makes the users experience recreational sensation, on the other hand, cigarette contains addictive substances such as nicotine, both THC and nicotine can be addictive, the effect they give to the person makes it hard for them to stop. Furthemore, when the users try to quit smoking they will experience withdrawals, they usually become more irritable, loss of apetite and moodswings, cravings and other physical discomfort, this occur because the user has become dependence to this substances.

Although it is hard to quit, some people has been success quit smoking, so it is not impossible. In my opinion, we can not force someone to quit smoking because they will feel that we are controlling them. As in my experiece it was really hard to make someone to stop smoking but it will be possible if the users himself have the will to stop smoking, in that time we can support them, try to comfort them when they going through a withdrawal, we can also educate them about things that might happen in the future if they keep smoking, and tell them that the risk from smoking is not only for them but also can impact their loved ones and do not nags them too much because for the users, quit smoking is a big deal and it is really challenging.

In conclusion, many people knows the danger of smoking but they find it hard to quit smoking and it can be really challenging for the users but it is not impossible to stop. So to help them to stop we can educate them about the danger that will haunts them in the future and support them when they wanted to quit.

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