[Kim Y] Writing Practice Test 712634
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
These days, carbonated drinks have become one of the popular drinks amongst people. Carbonated drinks are made through five stages. In this report, it will contain the information on the process of producing carbonated drinks.
Firstly, the water has to be cleaned. Raw water from water sources such as rivers and lakes, it will be cleaned by using a filter. Water softner makes the water softened, and the chemicals are added to make water clean. Cleaned water will be pumped to electric heaters. After being heated, cooling pipe transports the water to a a tank where carbon dioxide is mixed with the water. Then, the pipe will transport the carbonated water to a mixing tank which mixes the water with colours, syrup and flavour. Colours, syrup and flavour make the water to be tasted more like a juice or fizzy drink whereas normal water is tasteless. Afterwards, it will be filtered again and filled in bottles and cans. Packaging is the last process after filtering and filling. The carbonated drinks will be sold to supermarkets.
In conclusion, it is quite apparent that carbonated drinks are made through certain stages.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development than playing computer games. This essay will elaborate a point of agreement to the above statement.
To commence with the first reason, outdoor activities are good for children's health. As children run and play with ones' friends, outdoor activities will apparently relieve the stress. Furthermore, it is scientifically proven that an exercise is beneficial for all mankind as it is recommended by the doctors and scientists. For instance, doctors encourage the patients who have non-communicable diseases, known as lifestyle illnesses, to exercise more. Thus, it will prevent children from getting illnesses.
Additionally, spending time with one's friends will definitely help a child to build a healthy relationship with others. As a child learns universal values and realizes important aspects of life, it will greatly influence the way a child will live one's life. For example, a child can learn sportsmanship while playing sports with his or her friend.
On the other hand, playing computer games can lead a child to be addicted with electronic gadgets. Addiction is one of the most risky things which may put one's life into a pit. If a computer game consists of violent or aggressive contents within it, a child may get influenced. There are a great number of reports and thesis which focus on how computer games affect the children's behaviour in a negative way.
Moreover, electrical gadgets affect one's eyesight. Nowdays, as most of people are exposed to the lights from the devices, it can be easily proven that there are more people with glasses comparing to the past. Using a computer for a short period of time is not risky, however, using a computer for a long time for certain purposes, even if it is for research work, it will affect one's eyesight badly.
To conclude, it is proven that outdoor activities are more beneficial than playing computer games. Therefore, communities, parents, and teachers ought to encourage children to do outdoor activities rather than ordering a child be sitted for a long time, the act which causes unhealthiness.
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