雅思考官写作指导 - Part 2 例题与范文：祖父母与孩子

在雅思写作2中同学们通常会被问到许多不同类型的问题。根据这些问题，你需要逐一作出议论或解答。每当你看到一个询问你的意见的问题时，你需要明确地提供你的观点，否则相应问题的分数就会被扣除。为了确定该问题是否征求了意见，同学们需要仔细阅读问题的陈述，例如“你同意”，“您认为”等。同学们现在尝试以下雅思写作2的问题。

问题:

Nowadays in many families, the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples.

如今在许多家庭中，祖父母负责抚养和照看孩子（孙子辈），这对于祖父母自身的发展是好还是坏呢？给出你的观点和例子。

范例答案:

In this modernized world, grandparents are the ones who take responsibility for the upbringing of children rather than parents who are not able to do so due to their busy life schedule. This is not a good development for the grandparents who are so aged that they themselves instead need to be looked after.

To begin with, there are various reasons why grandparents are given the burden on their shoulders to take care of the kids. One of the major reasons is that parents are so much equipped with their daily work, being employed in companies, that they do not get sufficient time for their children. For example, families where both husband and wife are working in private companies for around 12 hours per day come back to their homes being tired up so much that they go to sleep. In this case, only the grandparents are free to spend time with their kids.

Further to this, though grandparents are making efforts to help the parents in taking care of their kids, it is not good for them as they also need a caretaker. Firstly, they are senior citizens and their age is also affecting their health. They usually need to visit the hospital for some or the other illnesses such as heart disease, high blood pressure, and others. Apart from this, it is difficult for them to handle young kids in helping them complete homework, letting them dress up properly for school and so on.

To conclude with, grandparents are dealing with a lot of difficulties in acting as career for the young kids which is actually the responsibility of parents. If parents manage their time well, it would be beneficial for the kids who can then get the required care by both from parents and grandparents.

译文：

在这个现代化的世界里，由于许多孩子的父母工作忙，有着满满的时间表，没有太多的时间照看抚养孩子，他们的祖父母就不得不为孩子的养育（教养）负责。这不是一个很好的发展方向因为许多祖父母的自身年纪较大，也需要被他人照料。

首先，为什么祖父母需要肩负照顾孩子的责任这里面有各种各样的原因。其中一个主要原因是孩子的父母日常在公司有很多的工作，他们没有足够的时间给孩子。例如，丈夫和妻子每天在公司工作大约12个小时才能回到他们的家中，他们已经很累了，以至于他们还要有充足的睡眠。在这种情况下，只有祖父母可以随时陪伴孩子。

此外，尽管祖父母正在努力帮助父母照顾他们的孩子，但对他们来说并不好，因为他们也需要监护人。首先，他们是老年人，随着他们年龄的增长他们的健康状况也会受到影响。他们通常需要去医院检查某些疾病，如心脏病，高血压等。除此之外，他们很难辅导孩子们帮助他们完成作业，让他们打扮得体去上学等等。

总而言之，许多祖父母正在处理着很多本来应是孩子父母负责的困难问题，并且把照看孩子作为退休后的职业。如果孩子父母能够很好地管理自己的时间，那么对于那些可以从父母和祖父母那里获得必要照顾的孩子来说，这将是有益的。

范文中出现的高分词汇：

同学们在以后的写作中可尝试使用以下在上文中出现的单词和短语：

• In this modernized world - 在这个现代化的世界里
• To begin with - 开始/起初
• One of the major reasons - 主要原因之一
• For example - 例如
• Further to this - 此外
• Firstly - 首先
• Apart from this - 除此之外
• To conclude with - 总结，总而言之

想要直接和雅思考官进行一对一在线辅导的同学们可以前往洋学伴的雅思页面预约私人课程。