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[Bahtinur B] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 560007

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The line graph illustrates the rates of people who are aged 65 and older in USA, Sweeden and Japan from 1940 to 2040.

According to the graph, all countries elderly populations fluctuated in the past, however; it is speculated that a number of senior citizens will show a dramatic and constant rise in the future.

At the beginning of the period, the percentage of 65-and-over-year-olds were increasing gradually in USA and Sweden, with marginal variations, while that in Japan was experiencing a modest decline.

In 1960, older population in Japan, which had the least elder population, was around one-third of USA, while Sweden was just under USA (around 3 per cent and exact 10 per cent and near 8 per cent, respectively).

After 2020 it is expected that Sweden is going to experience a moderate fall by approximately 1-2 per cent to 17 per cent then will begin to rise till 25 per cent in 2040. Meanwhile, USA is going to show a considerable rise, from 15 per cent to around 23 per cent, Japan will rocket until it reaches above 25 per cent, being the hugest proportion of old people.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

It is thought by many that the most substantial aspect of wealth is its facility to help those in need. I agree that helping people, especially deprived, is the most rewarding, hence significant opportunity that money provides.

It is obvious that having opportunity to access anything wanted provides privileged myriad things, however; I believe being able to help people i priceless since it gives any other thing it allows. Primary reason is helping gives aim to lives. For instance Hollywood Stars whom gone to African countries in order to help greedy vountarily, always come back their homes gaining a purpose in life and looking world from a different perspective.

In the modern world, money is frequently correlated with happiness, Unless its shared with others money does not bring happiness, despite rich people are often sad.

Most of the opportunities money provide are material, conversely helping gives moral, thus intangible outcomes such as happiness. When one helps other, tends to feel satisfied and completed. Experiencing the contribution to other lives is not only satisfactory but also a rewarding thing. Even a small help , such as feeding a street animal, changes all mood from depressed to pleasant in a moment.

In conclusion, heping others, not only humans but also animals and other creatures, gives people a aim in life and as a result makes them happy. Therefore i agree that most significant opportunity being privileged provides is its enabling nature of helping. If more rich were to help those in need, world would be a better place.

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