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[Mandana M] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 559873

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

This chart illustrates the proportion of population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in USA, Sweden and Japan.The vertical and horizontal pivets show that the percentage of population growth and the year of happens respectively. Also, it can be seen below that Sweden and USA community growth had been relatively equal in 1960 and 1980. But, further we go, it seems that the development of community aged 65 is decreased intensively about 2030 in Japan.

On the other hand, on the contrary and at the same time in the USA and Sweden are increasing.

Consequently and as a result, this proportional chart demonstrates that the population aged 65 years and over for all three countries will be increased and has estimated the percentage of this growth is about between 26%-27% in 2040.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, in the modern world or even third world countries, it seems to have a good job with enough salary is much more essential for adolescence. According to this cause it's necessary for all students who are studying at the university to learn many experiences,skills and more proficiencies in addition to academic education to be able to finde a good job after their studies in the future.

Therefore, to have a suitable job with adequate payment, helps everybody living comfort and walfare. Moreover, by these reasons, rich people or person with a good financial situation, mostly can help to each other especially poor person, charities or even orphanages setting up for this purpose.

In my opinion, if rich people spends some of their income or their money on a charity affairs, at least once in a month, then may be we don't see many children who are forced to work at young age instead of studying and drop out of school.

Eventually, I think that have suitabe income and good job is a big chance for everyone that can help poor people or develope societies and communities. Because humanitarian activities make people feel proud and pleasure in their life or even heart.

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