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[nallasravansairahul] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 559045

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The graph depicts the percentage of older people whose age is above 65 in three different countries, the USA, Japan, Sweden in between 1940 and 2040. The data is calibrated in percentage.

At first glance, all the three countries follow an upward trend throughout the period. Japan has the most proportion of aged people, followed by Sweden and at last with the USA.

Firstly, Japan is the country which contains more elderly persons compared to the remaining countries. It started around 5% in 1940, and then it take 2 decades to reach a plateau and then from the year 1980, it started to increase steadily till the end of the period. Moreover, In the year 2020, the percentage was about 10 it took a sudden bump to 25%.

Secondly, Sweden and USA also follow an upward trend, but these countries have more fluctuations. Sweden started at around 7% and it increases till 1980. Between the years 1980 and 2020, it started to vary more but by the end of the period, the value reached about 25%. Similarly, The USA starts nearly at 9% and by 1980, it was increased by 5% and then the number remains stable for the next two decades, by the end the value is around 23%.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

There is a common belief that the people who are rich will help others or provide an opportunity for other people. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement and this essay will further explain it with different examples.

Firstly, In our country, there are a lot number of people who are being rich. Among them, it's evident that few of them are only helping others to satisfy their life needs. For instance, One of my friend's families was well-settled and there were rich from their childhood. But, they never ever try to donate the money or help others with their needs. Instead, they used to buy things which are unnecessary for them. There is a situation, where a person has contacted them for an emergency. But they refused to give him a penny.

Secondly, There is a lot of people in our society who are helping others. Similarly, there are also, well social welfare organizations, the main idea of those is to serve the people. For example, we are from a middle-income group, but we used to serve the people that we can. This zeal to serve the people made my father start an organization named "TOSA". The main theme of it is to help the people or the students with their necessity needs. We conducted a lot of activities, few among them are, helping the poor by providing the necessary items to lead their life, distributing books for the student whose families are below low income, and a lot more activities.

In conclusion, Helping others does not depend on the income that we earn, it depends on the way that we think. There are people who serve others instead of their income. Similarly, there are people who don't help.

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