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[Fatimah S] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 495296

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

This line chart depicts the percentage of the population who is 65 years and over, from 1940 to 2040, in three different countries. It is clear from the graph that, the total number of people has been predicted to be higher in 2040 than it was in the 20th century.

According to what is shown, in the first 20 years, old people in all given nations remained at the same level without any substantial change. Following that, the Americans and Swedish rates increased slightly by 5% while the Japanese ratio declined by a tiny fraction.

In the next four decades, Sweden and Japan citizens figures rose from 14 percent to 18 percent and from 3 percent to 8 percent respectively. However, American people decreased insignificantly by about 1% only.

In the future, the forecast shows sharp rocking in these populations over the 3 countries.

To sum up, we could say that the number in Japan was the lowest compared to the USA and Sweden while it is predicted to be in the first rank after 19 years from now.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days there are various ways which people use for being rich. The question is does helping others contribute to increasing wealth? in this essay I am going to discuss some reasons and give my opinion.

The main reason was given to support that, helping friends can lead to richness. To illustrate, people might go in difficult situations or circumstances that they really feel hopeless so they seek their friends to facilitate the brainstorming and get up with the best solutions. In other words, clinical educators in the hospital helping nursing students who are in their initial years of practice by giving them the appropriate instruction, and by this way they might have an extra bonus as a reward. However, many investors believe that money can duplicate by investing it in the bank as a long-term benefit. For example, they can save thousands or even millions of dollars for a ten-year goal with a specific rate of benefit depending on their financial status.

Moreover, studying and working is the fundamental condition when people want to gain money as is it known worldwide. But investigators nowadays proofing that hard-working for more than 12 hours a day cannot lead to the financial-stability if you are not smart enough. This is because that the job can afford the basic salary for living and bells. Also, people should raise their awareness of how to develop their own business and investment.

In conclusion, although helping people could participate in being rich, many others think that is not enough to live as a first-class. In my opinion, I believe that children should learn how to save money from their parents to use it smartly when they grow up since serving other people is not the perfect way to being rich.

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