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[Adi A] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 388501

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The liner diagram below represents the proportion of people agaed 65 years and above throughout years of 1940 to 2040, in three different countries, USA, Sweden, and Japan.

Overall, all the three countries shows an upraise trend in the number of people aged 65 and above with the time of progress, but Japan seems to have lowest proportions of people aged 65 and above all the time, untill it comes to the time between year 2020 and 2040, the population of people aged 65 and above overtakes the number of people aged 65 and above in USA and Sweden.

By looking the proportion lines of USA and Sweden, we could see that the line of proportion of population aged 65 years and over in USA overtakes both Japan and Sweden stayed at the top, untill cames to years between 1980 and 2000, where there's a drop with the proportion line of USA and an increase with the proportion line of Sweden which overtakes proportion lines of both USA and Japan which didn't last long and finally got surpassed by the proportion line of Japan in between years of 2020 and 2040, and stayed in second.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Throughout the history, most of the people have very high expectations on the rich people helping and provides opportunities to the poors and needy, and that is claimed because in the past, the rich people will provide helps and offer opportunities to the individuals within the results of not effecting their own wealthiness.

I personally do not agree on this tend about rich people helping the individual is the most important thing, and in this essay, I will try to provide my views with examples.

It's well known that various of supperstars and celebrities has massive contributions and donations to the societies, and to the people whom were suffering from the lose of natural or unnatural disasters, but we all have to know one fact, for people to help others, is all about willingness, it's not an responsibility.

Rich people do not have any responsibilities to offer help or provide opportunities to any random individual, because the wealth of any celebrities or supperstars are also earned by their hard efforts, but now a days, with the aggressive praise of puplic opinion to celebrities or rich peoples, it becames a moral kidnapping to them.

For example, in this modern society, it's commonly seen, if a well known celebrity, refuses to do donations, or investing any help to the society, all the compliments will immediately turn into expletives and revile, with all the negative reports in public, will lead to lose in their popularity and wealthiness, which is a headache to any celebrities or superstars.

Lastly to my conclusion repeatingly, it's not a responsibility for rich people to help any individuals, especially the individuals with healthy physical status, no one should be expecting opportunities out of blue without trying or hard working.

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