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[Abdulla A] 2018年11月雅思写作真题第六卷 385973

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The line graph demonstrates elderly people population that aged over 65 in 1940 through 2040. The data recieved are from USA, Sweden and Japn. The graph clearly illustrates that at 1940 old people population was at a close range.

It seems that elderly people population in Japna kept declining slowly over the years till gaining a sharp increase in between 2020 and 2040. USA and Sweden kept steadily increasing although the USA had the most popultation of elderly people. However, around 2000 Sweden elderly people population inreased while the USA decreased below Sewden. Furthermore, The USA had a constant populaton for approximately 20 years from 2000 through 2020. On ther other hand, many fluctuations occured in Sweden population for instance, after USA population declined below Sweden, eledelry population increased to 20% before declining. Afterwards, Sweden suffered from a dramatic increase until it reached 25% in 2040.

To conclude, Japan elderly people over 65 percentage was at it's lowest in the previous years while USA and Sweden had more but Japan now has the highest elderly people over 65 percentage although all countires had a raise in elderly people population.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Being rich can let an individual gain chances to help others however I disgress with the proposed statment due to various reasons that would be discussed thorughout this essay.

At first, people requiring help may not be related with the fundings for example, a person may need assistance with his/her examinations that requires regular studying although a tutor could be hired for studying however this student does not have the sufficient fundings for the tutor while his/her friend who is smart in exam preparations could reach out to help. Also, when a tourist cannot communicate with the people in the country travelled to while being lost somewhere some citzens of this country can guide the tourist to someone to communicate with or to guide him thoroughly.

Secondly, in some occasions rich people might not help other although he has an enormous amount of money. In this case, this individual reflects his ethics while on the other hand some poor people give a hand for troubled people if it's with their reach. As such, helping others is proportional to the person's ethics and tradtions.

Lastly, in my point of view, most rich people cares about increasing their fortune through esablishing their business to have more profit while helping other people comes in last.

In conclusion, a reason to help people is not related of being rich or not in other words it does not concide with money it is related to the effort for helping other people in need as well as mentioned previously the person's good behaviour and ethics.

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