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[Mohammad S] 2018年7月雅思写作真题第三卷 738652

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The below figures depict the percentage of visitors to four attractive places in Britain in 1999. It is clear from the graph that most tourists loved Theme Parks and Museums & Galleries.

According to what is shown Theme parks had the highest number of visitors with around 38%, Within theme parks, people had visited multiple places with almost equal percentages except for Blackpool Pleasure Beach which had nearly 47% of Theme Parks visitors. Moreover, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor had the lowest number of Theme Parks visitors.

On the other hand, Wildlife Parks & Zoos are considered the least attractive places with accounts for 9% only, while Historic Houses & Monuments account for 16% in the second last place.

To sum up, we could say that each place in Britain had a different level of attraction based on the survey result.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

There is no doubt that these days information technology has invaded our space and dominated our home leisure and work. However, the question: is dominating our lives by this technology have a negative or positive impact on our lives? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

On one side of the argument, some people argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is integrating technology in every aspect eases our lives and decreases hardworking. For example, advanced houses with integrated voice commands give the person the ability to achieve multiple tasks without any physical activity. Moreover, the technology allows people to connect multiple devices with an email address and control them remotely. One good illustration of that you can switch on and off your home AC while you are at work by the WIFI technology.

On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact using advanced technology increase the number of unhealthy people. People often have this opinion because people become lazier, and their daily activity dramatically decreases making them prone to diseases.

As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that using advanced information technology should be limited to simple tasks, so at any point if a technical error happened you can resume your life without any obstacles.

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