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[Khpt W] Writing Practice Test 539472

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The graph illustrates the information about underground railways systems in six different cities. The given information are including commencement date, length of route and number of passenger per year.

Overall, London railway is the oldest while Los Angeles railway is the latest. Additionally, London railway has the longest route. Kyoto has the shortest route among these six cities. The number of passengers using Tokyo railway per year is the highest while the lowest number of passengers using railway is presented in Kyoto.

It is apparent that London has the oldest railway among these sample cities, it was established in 1863. Other railways have established in 19th century, except for Los Angeles which has opened in 20th century. London railway has the longest route, with the figure being 394 km, followed by Paris railway which the length of route is 199 km. On the contrary, Kyoto railway has very short route, which is considering 40 times lower than London railway. Move to the number of passengers using the underground railways system, the highest amount is occupied by Tokyo with 1,927 passengers per year, followed by Paris and London, with the figure being 1,191 and 775 passengers per year respectively. Furthermore, Kyoto also has the lowest number passengers using railway station per year, with the figure being 45 passengers per year which is presumable that due to their short length of route.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Nowadays, there are various kinds of kids competitions, for example songs competition, academic competition, and sport competition. Some parents believe that encouraging their children to involve in competition since very young age will be benefit when they grow up. However, some parents argue that they also believe that learning for coordination will give better benefit to their children instead.

It is true to say that encouraging the children to involve in the competition has various benefits. First, it can motivate the children to fully engage in particular activity. For example, every competition has winner and loser and everyone loves to be winner so their engagement will be spontaneous in order to win the competition. Also, there is loser for every competition, so the children can learn how to handle feeling of disappointment.

On the contrary, some parents believe that children who are taught to coordinate will grow up to be more useful adults. They consider that learning to work as a group will be benefit when their children attend to university or become an office worker where teamwork skill is required. Furthermore, they can learn to express the idea and listen to the others which will help develop them to be good adult in the future. Additionally, children who are taught to cooperate will have feeling of empathy rather than the children who are taught to have a sense of competition.

In conclusion, each family has thir own way to develop their children, accordingly I personally believe that they will consider the best thing to their children. Also, I believe that both learnings consist of various benefits whether learning to have a sense of competition or ability to coordinate with other people. The most important thing is children should be able to choose what they would love to be.

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