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[Mohamed E] Writing Practice Test 484240

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

This table has information about the underground railway systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles. It clarifies the date opened, length of route, and passenger per year.

London has the oldest underground railway system opened in 1863. The underground in London has the longest route among all six cities with 396 kilometre (Km). London expects to have 775 million passengers per year. In 1900, Paris undergroun opened with a route that is 199 km long. Paris has the second highest number of passengers per year with 1.191 billion passengers. Tokyo underground railway system opened in 1927, with 155 km length of route. Tokyo has the highest number of passengers per year with 1.927 billion. In the captial city of the United States. Washington DC underground railway system is opened since 1976; It has 126 Km length of its journey, only 144 million passengers uses it per year. Going back to Japan, Kyoto underground railways system had its grand opening in 1981. Kyoto underground has the shortest route with 11 Km only; it also has the least amount of passengers per year with 45 million passengers. Lastly, In 2001, Los Angeles underground railway system opened, with 28 Km length and 50 million passengers per year.

In conclusion, In the six major cities mentioned. The underground railways system seems to be crucial in cities that is mostly crowded. You can realize that, The bigger the city, the higher the number visitors per year.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

The sense of competitiveness can be fun and can bring out the best in you, but to children the case can be different. Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. On the other hand, others believe that children must be taught to be more co-operate which can make them more useful adults when they grow up.

Some parents teach their children to be an athlete in any kind of sport, which makes parents build the thurst to win in their kids. In my opinion, this is a very risky way to raise a child. For instance, who does not like winning, the feeling of winning can boost the morale of a child. However, winning is not always guaranteed. Assuming that the child started to lose his fire to this sports and starts to enter a cycle constant losses. Psychologically, this will be very unhealthy for a small human being who can not handle the pressure from adults, which can lead to psychological problems. Another reason to justify my opinion, when a kid is losing and gets the feeling of intimidation from other children, this can build an aggressive attitude to the child.

Building co-operate teamworking environment to a child has many advantages. As some people believe that children can become more useful adults in the future. In my personal opinion, this is the right way to raise a child. Teaching children to be more co-operate can give them the sense of building new friendship, thinking for the sake of the team or others, and reduces the selfishness in the child. Overall, the key of raising a child that will be beneficial to the community and building his/her own successful carrer properly is to teach them how to co-operate from a young age.

In conclusion, there are many ways to teach children what is right and what is wrong. All parents aim to see their child in a high position and living comfortably. In order to reach that stage of comfort, parents must teach their children the fundamentals of sharing and working together as a team.

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