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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

1. Tone (formal or informal)
Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly.

2. Purpose
The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the three points, writing a short paragraph for each.

3. Ideas
I recommend spending a few minutes planning ideas for each of the task points before you start writing. You need to decide what the evening course is about, what your full-time job is, a reason why you are too busy with work to continue with the course, and whether you want to leave completely or perhaps continue at a later date.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to you about my intention to withdraw from the course. I am working full-time as a clerk at the TD Bank. The work is very demanding, as I have to deal with difficult customers for many hours daily. My plan is to transition into a better career by taking this course.

While I initially planned to work while taking the course part-time, the rising living costs mean that I have to take on extra shifts to make ends meet. As a result, I am afraid that I can no longer participate in the course. I apologize for informing you so late into the course.

Despite this, I am not giving up on learning new things. If you can send me the course material, I will go over it during my lunch breaks at work. In addition, I would look for scholarship opportunities that can give me the money to offset the living costs and tuition.

Sincerely,

Donglin Wang

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Over the past several decades, people are producing trash at an alarming rate. Given the increased disposable income and the influence of the planned absolescence culture, people are producing more waste that damages our environment. To combat this, governments around the world need to educate the public and penalize those who don't take responsibilities for their trash.

The average household income have increased drastically over the years, giving them more purchasing power. While a household could only spare a couple hundred dollars monthly decades ago, modern households can spare over a thousand dollar each month. This leads to more consumption of goods, which often produces waste. In addition, the culture of planned absolescence became increasingly pronounced across all societies. Compared to the older generation, the younger generation often seeks out the newest products to replace the current ones instead of finding a product that can last a long time. This shift in behavior, combined with the increased income, means that more trash is produced.

To address this, governments need to increase the public awareness of the problem and discourage mindless waste. In order to raise awareness, more educational programs need to become available for both children and adults. These programs not only need to show the devastating impact of excessive waste but also educate the audience on how to cut down on waste. In addition, governments have the responsibilities to implement regulations that discourage people from producing more trash. They can do so by taxing individuals for their trash or penalizing those who don't recycle properly.

In conclusion, the increased income and planned absolescence are responsible for the increased waste. To address the situation, governments need to make the public aware of the problem and implement policies that discourage waste.

Your final score from examiner
Task 1(Overall)8.5
Task 2(Overall)8.5
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