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[Ankitha R Nalimela] 雅思写作真题 823729

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

1. Tone (formal or informal)
Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly.

2. Purpose
The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the three points, writing a short paragraph for each.

3. Ideas
I recommend spending a few minutes planning ideas for each of the task points before you start writing. You need to decide what the evening course is about, what your full-time job is, a reason why you are too busy with work to continue with the course, and whether you want to leave completely or perhaps continue at a later date.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

Dear Mr.Karthik,

I am writing to inform you that i cannot continue with this full-stack development course. As i am doing full-time job as ICT analyst, i am not able to handle both at a time. As my work load is increased, i am not able to followup the classes with you.

And i need to travel to office back and forth everyday,i am not able to find any proper time for my course. I have to look after my household work after hours.But i need to do this course in order to improve my knowledge to compete in this corporate world.

I want to continue this course later after two months,so i can plan in a way that nothing overlaps with my full-time work and course. Meanwhile, i try to gain some knowledge on subject, so that it will be easy for me to balace both my work load and course.

Yours sincerely,

Ankiha reddy

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In this 20th century, needs of human are increasing accordingly with population. As needs increases, products available in the market should be more as to supply each human. To fullfill our needs, the human uses every available resource from the nature.

To make that prouduct available to everyone, there should be easy of transport of that product. To our convenience we creating products like polythene or plastic.

Now polythene has became a daily need in our lives. Here not about only polythe, we are wasting so many things that can't be recycled like electonics,food etc.. We are producing more rubbish than olden days.

I would like to share of the incidents from my real life, we go to supermarkets daily for our daily needs. But we don't think much about carrying bags. Like i saw one of the customer using plactic bags to pick each fruit or vegetable seperately, she picked more than 5 bags to carry fresh produce list. This gonna produce so much of waste.

If we gonna reduce small amount of usage of plastic, we can easily reduce the waste in our households. Or we can also reuse them a 100 times in a day. Not only plastic we should start using reusable items or recycle procducts.

In my point, government should not allow to use plastic or general things which are not necessary for living. or start to create which we can recycle.

Not everything can be done by government,"We" citizen's need to take a initial step to reduce our household waste and need to seperate the general waste from recycle.

" Every big thing starts with a small step", that ''we'' need to initiate.

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Task 1(Overall)5.5
Task 2(Overall)5.0
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