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Task 1

Question

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

1. Tone (formal or informal)
Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly.

2. Purpose
The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the three points, writing a short paragraph for each.

3. Ideas
I recommend spending a few minutes planning ideas for each of the task points before you start writing. You need to decide what the evening course is about, what your full-time job is, a reason why you are too busy with work to continue with the course, and whether you want to leave completely or perhaps continue at a later date.

You should write at least 150 words.

Answer

Dear Mr Johnson,

I am writing to let you know that, unfortunately, I have to drop out of the Data & Analytics 102 evening course this semester. While I remain passionate about Analytics, my work engagements will prevent me from attending the course at 7PM.

Let me explain my situation. I am very proud to annouce to you that I have recently been promoted to head the supply planning department of my company, partly thanks to the digitalization skills I have acquired owing to your teachings. However, as the company still has to find a replacement for my previous role, I have to continue assuming the responsibilities for both positions for at least the upcoming 2 months. I am afraid this would translate into longer work hours, which will prevent me attending the course timely at 7PM.

Would you kindly help me freeze my enrollment to the course until the next semester ? I would really appreciate if you can help me avoid paying for the tuition fees next semester.

Many thanks in advance.

Yours faithfully,

Ismail