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[Angela C] Writing Practice Test 589367

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The table illustrates how much teachers teaching in secondary school got their pay monthly in 2009.

On the whole, it is clear that the more teaching experiences, the more wages they could earn. Moerover, the highest salary was Luxembourg and the lowest one was Australia. Then, Japan and Korea needed the longest times to achieve the maximum salary, while Australia and Denmark needed the shortest times.

Looking at the figure more closely, we can see that the wages in every countries was increasing. Especially Japan as well as Korea soared roughly in double, constituting the strating point of salary in former was from $34000 to $86000 and latter was form $30000 to $62000. On the other hand, Denmark and Australia were the lowest growth compared with other countries, representing $45000 to $54000 in Denmark as well as from $28000 to $48000 in Australia.

Furthermore, the longest times for reaching the highest salary were Japan and Korea, according for 37 years and 34 years respectively. Following by Luxembourg which needed 30 years and just slightly less than Japan and Korea. Conversely, Australia as well as Denmark needed the shorest times to achieve maximum salary, only about 9 years and 8 years.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, whatever people read news either in newspapers or on the internet, almost of the news are reporting negatively, such as protests, hijack and burglary. Only if during some festivals, reporters would reveal some postive contexts in the the news. These situations may be harmful for citizens whose mental health and psychological development. For me, typically, I partially agree with this statement.

Firistly, it is crucial that if the news reported something happens badly in our own city and country, these could increase residents' awareness as well as conscious to concern about their situations. That means their national-identify can be enhanced. Given the circumstance, when there was a large anti-goverment proptest in 2019 in Hong Kong, some residents would think of their responsibilities for the city and tend to be peacemakers to make some decisions to stop the protest. It is clear that negative news would be awakened people's mind to worried more about their city and country.

Even so, if there were a lot of news just concentrated on issues and disatsters, it could be weighed on people's mind. So that this cause more negative feelings and emotions spread to the city and country. For example, people being bule and upset in their daily lifes resulted from 2019 anti- goverment protests in Hong Kong, As a result of this, the economic development downturn seriously and many people felt more anger to the goverment and someone whose opinions are in an opposite side. This situation can not be resolved completely until now.

To sumarize, in general speaking, in one hand news fousing on harzards and crisis would increase people concerning, but on the other hand these could be harmful for our mental health and psychological debelopment. In my opinion, the key is moderatation. It is no doubt that making a balance is good for a society development.

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