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[Supriya S] Writing Practice Test 560463

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The figure illustrates the number of men and women who attended different evening courses at an education centre in year 2009. The pie chart depicts the proportion of attendance based on age group.

It is clear that there were more women then men in Drama, Painting and Language, while in sculpture class the number of male outnumbered the women. It is also observed in the language class, the number of student has reached 40 people, which was twice as the population of male.In the painting and drama class the population of men's student were accounted to be 25 and 10, which were lower than the women's figure which stood at 30 and 20 people. As for the sculpture class, the number of men reaching class were 10 people, while the women’s figure was halved of the men’s.

Based on the age group, it is obvious that the highest proportion of participants were above age of 50, accounted for approximately 42%. It was the followed by figures of two middle age group(40-49 and 30-39) which stood at 26% and 16%. As for those who were between 20 to 29 and below 20, their proportions were around 11% and 5% of each respectively.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Getting married is the most beautiful thing in this life! Nowadays gay marriage seem to be normal in various countries. However, some people still think that gay marriage can cause a lot of drawbacks to the society. There is another group that think that it is right to let the gays get married.In my opinion, gay marriage should be legal and people should have a positive view with gays. I do believe that there is no barrier exist in love.

As we all know having a gay marriage in 21st century is not a strange thing. Homo sexual people are treated better and equally. Gladly, they are not afraid of society and are not afraid to fight for their rights.For a long time, not only the gay community, but also other genders was asking for legalization of gay marriage.

However, society still has another group which supports and thinks that gays get married is right. Gays are like other females and males, they also deserve to have a happy ending and a great family. It is called gender equality. No one says that the definition of ‘’marries’’ is to have kids, or it has to be done by men and women. People still have a happy family without children even the normal couple. Humans should have positive views of them because they have been trying so hard for many years to prove to the world that gays also have a right to live, love and to be loved.

Homosexual people are not able to choose their gender and they deserve to have a legal gay marriage law. I have a gay friend and I know it is hard to live as gay. It would not be a negative development if humans have positive thinking and feeling.

In conclusion, I do believe all the genders are having a right to love. I hope that gay marriage will be approved over the world in the future. Love has no right or wrong and it depends on your feeling.

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