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[Md F Bin Hassan] Writing Practice Test 560157

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The chart provided here demonstrates the male-female ratio and different age groups of India and France in 1984.

France's drop in the percentage of human population with age level has fluctuations here and there. India also sees a drop of population with the increase of age but it is way smoother than France. In both countries, the male population drop is much faster than the female population drop.

In France, the youngest age group, which is 0-5 years has almost equan males and females and it's around 3.75% for both. Then there are a few irregular fluctuations and the highest percentage of men is about 4%, and it's for the age group of 10-15, 15-20, and 30-35. The highest women percentage is for 30-35 years and it's about 4% too. After that age, populantion decreases both genders, and the lowest male and female percentage are for above 85 group and they are around 0.5% and 1% respectively.

On the other hand, Indian population is highest for the lowest age group, which is 0-5 years. The percentages are 7% for men and around 6.5% for women. The population drops steadily with respect of age level and the lowest percentage is for 65-70 years group. The percetange of 70 above human is a bit higher the the previous group and it sits at about 1% for each sex.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.

Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In today's competitive era, many parents go an extra mile to ensure that their children are getting enough education. They try to arrange extra classes after school or at weekends thinking that's best for the kids. While many will oppose the idea and classify this as extra pressure, I think it's worthwhile to provide extra care to the children, if the parents or the children think they are not learning efficiently in school.

Universally, a school system can not provide equal attention to all the students present there. Every class has a diverse set of children, and it is obvious that all the students are not at equal level. Each child has his/her own way of understanding things, and this creates the difference in their learning speed. But for a class to function properly in scheduled time, the teacher adapts for the teaching speed and technique that is suitable for the majority. That leaves out a small but significant number of students, who require additional attention.

Once a parent realises that the kid is not understanding properly, they organise extra classes or home tuition by hiring someone to teach the child. The teacher can provide one-to-one attention and apply a teaching system that is unique and easier for the kid. For example, I was very bad at geometric theorems in my early high school life. I was a introvert person back then, so I was afraid of being ridiculed and that stoped me from asking questions in the class. My father arranged a home tutor and I got better in or around six months, and now I am an engineering student.

In concluding remarks, the whole point of extra classes is to provide the children an platform to have proper education. These steps should help a kid grow as a better student, as ensuring equal opportunity is the main priority here.

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