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[Majd M] Writing Practice Test 526483

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The two bar charts depict the age distribution of the males and females’ inhabitants of France and India during 1984.

Overall, it can be seen that India's population is decreasing within the age growth, while France has some fluctuation throughout the year.

Referring to India age structure, there is an equal number of men and women in the ages, for example, the quadragenarian group is 3 and 2.5 % for both genders, while the proportion is decreasing within the age development, a slight increase is noticed for the age group above septuagenarian with around 1.5 % to both sexes.

Regarding France, in general, the percentage of men and women slightly differs. Female's percentage is increasing with the rise of age comparing to males, from 80-85 years old men tend to have about 1% of the population while women had approximately 2%. The largest age group percentage of both feminine and masculine was between 10 to 35 years old.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.

Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

These days parents are planning for additional after schooling for kids during both weekdays and weekends. In my opinion, I believe that the school curriculum has a programme offering enough knowledge and experience to the students while they are at school.

Studying minimum 6 hours a day for 5 days in a row a week at school involve a method of giving and receiving information. During the school hours the kid are concentrating on the subjects they are studying, for this reason after the school period student should have a space to relax and enjoy their life at the same time. For example, going to a sport or art activity in the afternoon is very beneficial for both physical and mental health.

On the other hand, learning in excess can be toxic, since the individual can concentrate for certain amount of time and also can accept certain amount of information, so by overloading children with studies, their brain will shut down at some point and stop being able to understand the instructions. Giving the idea of a child who is learning two hours of mathematic at school every day, coming home and having tutoring for also two hours, it will tire the tutee mentally, that’s why a lot of student are facing anxiety and depression problems at younger age because there is a lot of pressure from their parent concerning their marks.

To conclude, everything in life should be in moderation and especially when it comes to children, because it's their primely right to live and enjoy their childhood by enjoying their free time and of course by making sure they are studying hard for school.

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