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[Johan P] 雅思写作真题 1018880

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

1. Tone (formal or informal)
Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly.

2. Purpose
The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the three points, writing a short paragraph for each.

3. Ideas
I recommend spending a few minutes planning ideas for each of the task points before you start writing. You need to decide what the evening course is about, what your full-time job is, a reason why you are too busy with work to continue with the course, and whether you want to leave completely or perhaps continue at a later date.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I wont have time to do the part-time course anymore, let me explain my situation, my bos have asked me if I can work longer hours and I have agreed to it.

Unfortunitly I can not continue at this time because I will be working in the time the course is ongoing, therefore i have dicided to stop the course for now.

I would still like to finish the course at a nother time when my working hours are more flexable, I hope you will understand my situation and fined that i have made this choise for my best intrest. Thank you fore giving me the oppertunaty to be part off the course I realy dit injoy it.

Your Sincerely

Johan Pienaar

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Rubbish is becoming a big problem, and we as people needs to take action. In todays live we are making more rubbish than we can manage. In this essay I am going to discus why people produce so many rubbish, and wat the governments can do to help reduce the amount of rubbish being produced every day.

Nowadays the amount off rubbish is because off our own actions, people don't recycle enough, its easier for people to dump all of there rubbish in one bag, insted of placing each individual product in seperate recycling bags. The stores also needs to recycle more and stop dumping thare rubbish in one big bin.

The covernment needs to be more strict about recycling, fore example they can make a law to force people to recycle, the covernment can also make recycle bins that is made of all the rubbish we produce every day. Therfore work opportunities will be creatted by building a recycling plant that produce plastic bins for recycling, all the rubbish must go to the plant to be used to make plastic bins and other recycling products. The covernment needs to supply each household with three different bins, fore example, a green bin is fore glass and a red bin is fore plastic and a blue bin is for carton boxes.This is an very affective way to re-use rubbish again.

My conclusion is that poeple needs to be more green when it comes to our every days lives, recycling will become the next best thing to keep our planet clean and safe, people need to be more commited when it comes to recycle

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