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[Thembani N] 雅思写作真题 1018553

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

1. Tone (formal or informal)
Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly.

2. Purpose
The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the three points, writing a short paragraph for each.

3. Ideas
I recommend spending a few minutes planning ideas for each of the task points before you start writing. You need to decide what the evening course is about, what your full-time job is, a reason why you are too busy with work to continue with the course, and whether you want to leave completely or perhaps continue at a later date.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

Dear Mr Simon

Hope I find u well. I am writing this letter to inform u about a job offer we once talked about. I haven offered a job outside town.

Will find it very difficult to attend to my evening course lessons the job offer is outside town been looking forward for this opportunity.. I'm very sorry sir becouse I won't be able to attend lessons during the week and this have made my improvement in my lesson trop but making sure that I will work hard to keep in proving

I wiil do online lessons during the week after work making sure I will submit my essays on time, making sure that I come every weekend for face to face lessons and the help from my classmates

Giving me feet back on what they learn everyday in class.

Hope u will understand my point of view

Yours suncerely

Thembani Nyoni

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

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