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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The process diagram depicts the circuit-boards production.

It can be clearly seen from the overall trend that production consists of several stages. Also, the given information shows that automated IC attachment and soldering, visual inspection, and quality control should be checked again during the final testing.

The first step of the production of circuit boards is the delivery of necessary material. The second step is cutting and spraying this material with a fire retardant. After that, a circuit-board material should be cleaned and delivered to another sector of production. According to the data, automated IC attachment and soldering are being used in this sector. The next step is checking on visual and quality disadvantages. In case circuit boards do not have defects, they are finally tested, packaged, and delivered to factories. Notwithstanding, if some boards are detected as defective during the first or final testing, chips from rejected boards are thrown away.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing Task 2

Boxing is a dangerous kind of sport that may cause physical injury. Some people tend to believe that this sport should not exist nowadays. This controversial statement has both advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed in this essay.

A tremendous number of people think that boxing is an excellent way to fit a body and improve coordination. For instance, if parents want their kids to know how to defend themselves, they let them attend boxing masterclasses. However, the main aim for parents is to find a skilled, experienced coach for their children. They may think if a teacher is an expert, their kids will not suffer during training. Notwithstanding, it does not always work like that.

On the other hand, a lot of people completely disagree that boxing as a business industry has a right to exist in the modern world. They are convinced that people who fight should not suffer because of the wishes of rich people who enjoy the show. For example, if a young person gets a physical injury during a fight, he will probably get money for that; however, it does not mean that he will get better after the final battle. Also, people who protest against this blood sport probably dislike advertisements related to boxing. They may think that even these videos impact people's behaviour and motivate them to commit violence against others.

In conclusion, boxing is a part of the blood business that should be forbidden in the modern age. From my point of view, if a person wants boxing nowadays, there are a lot of different ways to do it, like VR simulation, without harming other people.

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