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[Bao N Nguyen] Writing Practice Test 596540

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The table illustrates the proportion of children who had different educational problems at two different schools from 2005 to 2015

Overall, in 2005 and 2015, the vast majority of children faced many problems such as classroom attention, listening ability, listening ability, and ability to express ideas. It is worth noting that there has been a decline in educational issues at School A, while the opposite trend can be seen in the percentage of school B.

In 2005, 42% of students had difficulty concentrating and 40% of students followed instructions in class, and the corresponding figures for these problems dropped significantly after 10 years, both 18%. Problems with listening skills and verbally expressing ideas also showed these improvements over the past 10 years.

However, school B saw a regression in the problems the students are experiencing. In 2005, 5% of students had difficulty with spelling, while in 2015 the number doubled to 10%. The same pattern can also be seen in the situations where students had difficulty following the instructions. In contrast, the number of students faced with writing and classroom attention problems remained the same over the 10-year period, at 7% and 10% respectively.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Many people believe that older workers should be allowed to work even after reaching the retirement age of 60 or 65. Other people think they can keep working as long as they want. In my opinion, both views have their own advantages.

Firstly, employees who retire at 60 or above benefit many organizations in different ways. As people retire at 60, companies can offer younger employees an opportunity to compete for what is expected to become a part of an organization. In addition, while older workers have extensive experience in their field of work, their wages and benefits can account for a considerable portion of any company's financial expenses. Companies will benefit from reallocating financial resources to other areas that may benefit the entire company.

Secondly, old people can be valuable to society when they are allowed to work. Instead of going to work according to the schedule of ordinary office workers, they can spend their time doing jobs that they prefer and work that brings more benefits to society. For example, many companies can hire these people as consultants or trainers. Many people are hired to become professors in their seventies By applying this approach, retired employees can have the opportunity to spread their knowledge and experience to others. In addition, holding training courses and seminars will provide retired workers with an additional source of income beyond pensions.

In conclusion, while some people see that retiring workers at the age of 60 is considered hard, this action benefits the organization financially. In addition, it is a well-established fact that retirees can create more value for society after retirement.

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