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[Chinh N Lai] Writing Practice Test 589015

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The table compares seven different educational difficulties in two elementary school which students experienced in the years 2005 and 2015. It is noticeable that while school A managed to reduce the incidence of these difficulties between 2005 and 2015, school B saw an overall rise of the rate of children who were struggling.

In 2005, the most two significant problems that students at school A had to deal with were following instructions and concentration in lessons, which accounted for above 40%. Meanwhile, the percentage of these two difficulties decreased dramatically to 18% in 2015.. There were slight reductions in the proportion of spelling, listening skills and verbal expression of ideas in the period, which were to 5%, 15%, 4% respectively. This percentage of students reading ability rose by 1% and the amount of handwriting still stable.

Students at school B considered verbal expression ideas and concentration in lessons were the biggest difficulties, which around 15% of them struggling. The other problems had slowly rise about 1 to 6%. There was only the rate of handwriting still unchanged.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, All-over the world, various sections of people in society encounter an extensive discussion about working life after retirement age. Some group of members believes that continuing professional work after old age is difficult, and should be restricted by the authorities with stringent rules by considering the social benefits, whereas others have an opinion that old people should be allowed to work until their wish. However, I strongly support the former opinion. Additionally, this essay describes my views along with supportive examples.

Firstly, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most important points that one needs to consider here is, it will help society in solving unemployment issues. Some countries have a strict rule that none of the citizens is allowed after a certain age. Due to this, they are creating vacant roles which will get replaced by freshers. For instance, Japan has brought down their current unemployment rate to 20% less than the previous year. Hence, many countries are looking for imposing this option.

Secondly, another significant reason why I support the idea of not allowing old age people to work after retirement is that their deprived health condition. There is a widespread worry that It would trigger the worst consequences in their lives if they were allowed to work even in that severe unhealthy position. For example, as per the survey, on average 10% of old people are dying every year because of high pressure at work. Thus, many old people have been retiring at 60 years.

To conclude, while analysing the discussed points, it is wise to tell that the old age people should not be allowed to work despite having a necessity to work for a living.

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