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[Lam M] Writing Practice Test 580782

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The charts illustrate the ways to handle the harmful garbages in Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom.

The main method of solving the dangerous waste products problem is different in three countries. Recycling covering 69% is an important path in Republic of Korea. Sweden and United Kingdom prefer to underground them. Most of the harmful garbages were disappeared by underground in United Kingdom and about half of them were dealt with in the same way in Sweden. Incineration is seldom used, only 2 % wastes would be destoried by fire in United Kingdom, 9% in Republic of Korea and 20% in Sweden.

Moreover, United Kingdom would apply the two other approach of chemical treatment and dumping at sea. There are about 8% wastes dealt with chemical treatment and 8% would throw into the sea without garbages recycling.

Overall, there are noticeable differences in dealing with the dangerous waste products in three countries and three methods are used in Republic of Korea and Sweden but there are four possible choices in United Kingdom.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

It is believed that overweight problem of children is caused by government. In my opinion, government sometimes plays an important role in this issue to which family could contribute more.

Lack of regulations on food production, city planning and video games related to government leads to rising weight of children. Firstly, there are more unhealthy food selling to children. Food industry used more suger and fat to produce beautiful and tasty snack which can attracted the attention of children. Junk food does harms to children's health and results in obesity. Secondly, city planning considers less about the public space for children doing exercise outdoors. Most of children live in city with busy traffic and crowded people and there are limited places for them to do some sports which is helpless to keep fit. Thirdly, addiction in video games enable children to get out of home seldom. They play the games with the same body action for a long time, which is not beneficial for them to burn the calorie.

More importantly, family is the origin of obesity problem. Diet and exercise habits form in daily life within parents. The requirements from family memeber is vital for children to eat healthy and have regular physical training. For example, parents can plan diet of children and list some food with high-value nutrition. Some sports facilities could be bought home and let children do sports following a restricted timetable, which is helpful for them to decrease the weight.

In conclusion, government should tackle the overweight problem in children by managing the food industry, city planning and video games, however, family is a key factor that declines the amout of fat children with the efforts of parents.

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