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[Elvira A] Writing Practice Test 563200

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The chart below compares the percentage of pupils, who study in two primary schools and have variuos problems in educational proccess in 2005 and in 2015.

Overall, it is clear from the chart that school A and school B have opposite results during one period. School A, in general, improves all presented aspects, except a reading ability, which increased to 1%. Situation with educational problems in the School B worsened almost in all areas.

School A has a great improvement in such areas as listening skills and verbal expression of ideas, where it decreased the percentage nearly for 15%. Moreover, this school represents a significant success in the further problems : concentration in lessons and following instructions. In these spheres the school reduced indicators almost twice: from 40% to 18 % and from 42% to 18%.

School B can not show the same high achievements as the previous one. Some educational problems in 2015 leave at the same level as it was in 2005. For instance, reading ability, handwriting, listening skills, and concentration in lessons. Some of them has the same percentage, while others increased by 1 %. The remaining areas, namely spelling and following instructions, present the worst regress. These indicators worsened twice, from 5% to 10% in the first one and from 6% to 12% in the second.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Retirement is an issue with which almost every person will face in his\her life. According to world statistics, a common age, when we should retire, is between 60 and 65 years old. Some people take it for granted and maintain a retirement policy, while others claim that pensioners should be allowed to work as long as they wish.

Some aged people appreciate an ability to work after the retirement. This gives them an opportunity to earn enough money to live without worrying about economic problems. They will not concern about crises or any other financial issues because they will not suffer from governmental cuts in the social sphere as the other not working people will do. For instance, russian pensioners basically receive an extremely low pension, which sometimes can be lower than a living wage. In this situation, people of a retirement ages are forced to work to provide basic needs. Another situation is in the China, where a pension does not exist at all. If chinese pensioners want to exist, they work.

However, whether it is safe to leave an old person at any working position? It is widely known, that retirement reform is implemented as a necessary measure. Although pensioners want to continue their working, they may have some medical restrictions. The most common problems are bad vision, limited activity, and decreased possibilities to hear. Moreover, need to remember that this category of people becomes more vulnerably to different deases like Altscheimer or hypertension, what could cause a harm to themselves or even to the company where they serve.

I personally feel that here must not be a dicrimination towards aged people or any restrictions for their future working even after the retirement. If a pensioner wants and is able to work, he\she should be allowed to.

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