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[shu l] Writing Practice Test 545361

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The diagram shows the floor paln for a house and the proposed changes to be made.

The house has three main areas. The kitchen is located to the left of the house, hall stairs are in the middle, and the living room is at the right-hand side. There are two entrance doors, one at the top of the kitchen and the other one is at the bottom of the hall stairs. There is a storage under the hall stairs and there are two internal walls on both side of the hall. Apart from that two walls, there are two internal doors built on it. The internal doors serve as the entrance to the kitchen and the living room.

The proposed major changes are taking away the internal wall in the living room, facilitate kitchen furnitures in the kitchen, and move the internal door from the top of the kitchen to the bottom. Furthermore, there are some minor changes such as removing the storage under staris, reduce the width of the kitchen's internal wall to fit in a bigger internal door.

Overall, the proposed plan make the house more spatial by reducing the internal walls and doors.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Every children recive a certain years of complusary and free education in morden society, yet, some people agrue that teaching children at home is better than put them to schools. In my opinion, the benifits of public education are outweight the advantages of home schooling.

Advocators for home schools believe that home schools can provide more attentation to children in compare to a public shools, given that public schools have an average of more than twenty to one students to teachers ratio. Moreover, every child's abilities and personalities are unique. Parents always know their kid's better, therefore, home schooling can provide the optimial teaching plan for children. Last but not least, children suffer less stree if they don't have to do regular examinations and tests in school.

In contrast, there are lack of opportunities to practise soical skills at home. Needless to say, soical skills are vital to the morden soicety, therefore home school children may not be able to adopt to the work enviroment when they grow up. Furthermore, not all parents are qualified teachers, they may know their children well but lack the essental skills to teach them. Statistically, there are less than 10% of the parents have an university degree, as a result, the chance for average families to give a better education then public school is grim.

In conclusion, although there are a few advantages for home schooling, the chances to sucess are low. Average families can not provide sound eduction to their offspring without professional training, despite parents have a closer relation to their children. One should not risk their children's future to pursue an unsustainable education plan.

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