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[Ahmed A] Writing Practice Test 535973

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The following diagrams show the current floor plan, and the proposed floor plan for the future.

The current floor plan has a main hall, a kitchen, and a living room. All three parts of the floor will be separated by internal walls, and the stairs will be built in the main hall.

In the proposed changes, the wall between the hall and the living room will be eliminated to creare more space for the living room, and the stairs will be pushed from the middle to the back of the building to create more room for bigger kitchen doors.

At the cost of the main hall, the current stairs, and the extra storage space under the stairs, the proposed floor plan will bring a much bigger living room, wider doors for the kitchen, and newer stairs style.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

When it comes to educating children, people have two options. Either sending the children to school, or teaching them at home. I'll discuss both options' positives and negatives, then give my opinion to which I think is the better options.

Sending your kid to school not only helps get the public and necessary knowledge at schools, but can really help them form social bonds with other children at the school, and learn the important skills needed to be able to communicate with other people with very few issues. However, a lot of children at school face many issues with bullying. Moreover, the children could be learning stuff the parents wouldn't agree with, and this could form a barrier between the children and their parents in the future.

Homeschooling your child can be a very good way to ensure the kid grows up learninf only stuff they need and things that will help them in the future, and can be a good way to ensure the child doesn't meet the wrong people and form bad relationships that could affect them negatively as they grow up. However, keeping your child at home for very long periods and not giving them a chance to meet other people can be very dangerous for the child's social and communicational skills, and could badly hender their ability to form meaningful relationships with other people around them.

In my opinion, unless the child has a special need for personalized schooling, it would be a way better idea to send them to school. This way not only do they gain the public knowledge everyone their age is getting, but ensures they learn the communicational skills needed to have a normal social life and become independent succesful adults.

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