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[luca m] Writing Practice Test 518709

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The diagrams presents the existing ground floor plan of an undefinited house and a proposed plan for some builiding work.

Overall, the house is divided in two major aeras, the kitchen and the living room, as well as are divided by a hall stairs. It is evident that the proposed plan is different than before, for instance the living room is smaller than before, the hall stairs is completely different and the kitchen has new furniture.

The kitchen, in the new proposed plan has new kitchen furniture on the left, and on the right the internal door and the internal wall are now opposite, with two internal doors next to the entrance door.

The living room is bigger in the new plan, and both the internal door and wall are now disappeared. As a result, the living roome is now an open space aera, directly connected with the kitchen's doors.

The hall stairs is completly new respect to the existing floor plan. There is no more the storage under stairs and the stairs have a new design.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Nowadays, many people believe that is important for children to go at school, but others think that teaching children at home is better than go to school. I found more advantages than disadvantages in going at school than staying at home. This essay will analyze the avantages of both methods, and why is better to go to school, in my opinion.

Going to school is vital for a child's education, and I am certainly conviced on this. Firstly, it is important that every child should grow up in a class, that could offer them an opportunity to make some new friends and improve their social skills. Secondly, a class is important to create a competitive ambient between children, from the beginning. Lastly, in a class is easier to start collaborate with your classmates, and achieving skills like teamworking. For example, in my personal experience I have noticed that during the first years of school my social behaviour have grown year after year, considerably.

On the other hand, teaching children at home could have advantages too. For instance, a child is better follow during his development by a personal teacher. However, this is the only advantage that I could recognise, due to I definitely believe that this pro does not outweigh the ones that I wrote about in the previous paragraph.

To conclude, I think that the are more advantages than disadvanatges in studying in a class respect to study at home. The main reason why I am firmly convinced on this, is due to the fact that the importance in making solid social skills are more important. Improving those skills as soon as possibile is far more important than have a solid knowledge in diffrent subjects.

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