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Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The manufacturing of circuit bords are constructively conveyed by the diagram. It shows the process and steps of the whole production from the start with only scrap materials of the bord to the fully finished product.

The manufacture starts with the delivery of circuit- bord material. Right after that, materials are cut and sprayed with fire retardant. Then comes cleaning the materials that has been previously cut and sprayed. The next step is the attachment of Automated IC and soldering of the bords. Then the whole product goes through visual inspection and quality control testing. Then its time for the final testing.

If the manufactured gets rejected, it goes back through Automated IC attachment and soldering as well as visual inspiration and quality control testing and the chips from rejected bords are thrown away. When final testing is done it gets packaged and gets delivered to factories. Thus, the production of the circuit bords consist.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing Task 2

Some belives Boxing is unseemly because it's a blood sport which frequently consequences in corporal injury, therefore this sport should not be existing in the current age. This essay firmly disagrees with the statement.

To begin with, one of the main reason for this sport to exist is for the entertainment it gives an individual. In other words, boxing is one of the sport where it is not only fun since in the moment it not only gives the player an adrenalie rush but also it occurs breathtaking moments for audience.For example,in recent Time magazine, thery were talking about a boxing match that has occured and discussed the whole match which naturally stirs up conversations as well helps the sport get more publicity. Moreover, there is someing oddly satisfying in boxing matches that helps people to be in the moment.

Secondly,like every other sport boxing is an amazing sport to get ones frastration out in a helthy way even though the results can sometime leave the boxers with injuries and lifelong damages. To exaplain further, in every physical sport from football ,tenis and all the other sport there is always chance of getting injured one way or other, it's called sport injuries.To illustrate, in recent studies done by Oxford, it says that in all type of sports as well as doing normal gym there is always risk of getting fractures or other serious injuries.Besides,phycologists recomend this sport to thoes who has serious anger issues to help them get that emotion out in a hwalthy way and to prevent them from other risky behaviour.

In conclusion, this essay based on the above discussion, firmly agrees with boxing being a thrilling sport that exist in this day and age.Although it causes serious life threating injuries like every other sport, it is quite an entertaining sport to watch as well.

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Task 1(Overall)7.5
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